BS: P/P: Adult: Wanna Be Startin' Somethin'

[gibson_fic]

Title: Wanna Be Startin’ Somethin’
Author: gibson_fic
Fandom: Bandslash, Fall Out Boy
Characters/Pairing: Pete/Patrick
Rating: Adult for language and themes
Word Count: ~1600
Warning: None
Disclaimer: This is a fictional story about characters based, in part, on the images and histories of real people. If that bothers you and/or you are one of those people,

Comments

[megyal]

Goodness. This fit that prompt so perfectly! Those two lines, taken by themselves, you did such an awesome job with them. And then when I listen to the rest of the song to this fic, this part just seems so fitting as well:

If They Say -
why, why, tell 'Em that it's Human Nature
why, why, Does he do me that way

Amazing. Thank you; I think you have such a good handle on the dynamic that might occur between them.

[gibson_fic]

I'm glad you liked it. :) It wasn't what I was initially going to do and I still think that shows in the flow of it, but I liked where it ended up too much. :D

Thanks! I have all sorts of tinhat opinions about P/P. ;)

[chrisrin]

:D It twas very good my dear. smooshy goodness.

(there were a few typos, but I'm sure you'll see they die a swift and merciless death). :p

[gibson_fic]

Thanks! I *think* I got the typos. Ugh. This writing on the fly stuff makes for sloppy work. :(

Smooshy goodness. :D

[chrisrin]

Well if i could read it more quickly it was worth it.

[mrsquizzical]

lovely.

[gibson_fic]

thank you. :D