Fics: Unburthened and Essence

[maya_spins]

Title: Unburthened
Author: Maya
Genre: Slash
Rating: PG
Summary: It had been a long day.
Word Count: 2243
Prompt: The Wake Up Call
Author's Notes: Thanks to lucifers_toy for the beta. And to crimsonquills, teddibear and nilahasi for the Gibbs/Tony-A-Thon itself.

Comments

[kira_bouviea]

Wonderful...just wonderful.

[maya_spins]

Oh, thank you!

[amarock]

Beautiful..you just made my morning that much better (after a rather bad start), especially liked the slow build and characterization of Tony :-).

[maya_spins]

I'm glad to hear it. *bg* Thanks so much for saying so...

[moonprincessnat]

Unburthened
Very nice! You could just feel the worry eating Gibbs alive. Abby nailed it: panicking in slow motion describes Gibbs state of mind perfectly.

Essence
Aww, so sweet. I like the little snippets that show the growth of the relationship between Gibbs and Tony.

[maya_spins]

Unburthened
Thanks so much! I typed that phrase and went, "Oh, I like that." Hee. I'm glad that the gnawing worry got through.

Essence
I have a soft spot for this fic. I'm so glad you liked it!

Thanks for commenting!

[iniq]

Mm, so very good. I love the warm, cozy feel the whole thing has to it, both of them. Love the emotions and the style. ♥

[maya_spins]

Thanks, and thanks, and thanks. *g* I'm glad you think I got the mood right.

Oh, look, I got a heart. *sighs happily*

[spikedluv]

Those were great! Loved the reunion in the first one, and how much info we got about how horrible the last 6 months have been for Gibbs in just a few words. The second one was great; loved each of the moments that showcase their relationship, and the last line especially.

[maya_spins]

and the last line especially

*cheers* It took me three days to iron out that last line. And you like it! Yay!!!

Thanks for commenting!