Revenge of the Kitties

Mar 22, 2009 07:05

* I know I didn't win last week from Bridgits Flame, but I got SO many comments on my "Devils in the details" story, I felt compelled to write a continuation of what happened to the "cats" .  This is just for fun, so enjoy.  (I'd also like to point out that my four year old is helping me with how they come back to being boys)

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plastrickland23 March 23 2009, 11:49:52 UTC
Interesting! The 1st part left me with a creepy feeling...a "good" kinda creepy! A Stephen King kinda creepy....A ton of ways to take the story...

This section...not so much...but I can see potential to make it so....like the men stealing the recipe so that they can turn into cats at their choosing and go off and do other stuff disguised as cats....Maybe rescue "Cat" and take him along...or we find out that "Cat"'s real identity is some famous political person who's gone missing all these years....Hmmmm....Keep going at this.....
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thanks for the comment giazz_40 March 23 2009, 13:02:04 UTC
I'm not sure if you read the first story, where the old cat lady turned the guys into cats...this was the cats turning back into boys. My husband thought of the idea of Cat not really being a boy/man turned into a cat, yet, just really a pet that wanted to stay with the old lady. Or could be the cat wanted to stay a cat....hmmmm....I'm glad you like this. Hubby thinks I should publish the stories (not the play though, last try at that...) let me know your thoughts.

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