Prompt:
5 times Nation A realized they were in love with Nation B
Pairing: Germany/France
A.N.: Well, instead of working on the other meme fills I wanted to make this one caught my attention. The main point of this fill was and still is for me to give France some more love (he definitely needs and deserves). 'cause it seriously bothers me that all
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Lovely, lovely piece, and this - The main point of this fill was and still is for me to give France some more love (he definitely needs and deserves). 'cause it seriously bothers me that all initiative has to come from him D: ! - is one of my favorite parts of it, because gosh there really isn't enough of it out there. ♥♥♥
And my other favorite parts are, well, everything. >>; But especially the way it highlights the little things about their daily interactions to show how they're changing--the cast that love gives to ordinary things is like one of my favorite things to read about ever, so this totally hit all my happy buttons. :DDD
And as always, your writing is just beautiful. :)) On the subject of the name-switching, I like what you're doing with it, and the only part where it jarred me was the switch in the ending two sentences--I think keeping it as just 'Francis' at that point would make more sense for the progression of intimacy? :o
Annnnd yeah this's another one I'll be rereading forever. |D Keep writing! I can never get enough. ♥
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OMG,am I that easy to detect? Gahh,now I have to change my writing style xD".
Awwww <3~ Well,it is true, all the fics with England/France or any other pairing I have read always have France as the pervert who wants to jump somebody D:
I think that's a bit sad to only see him wooing others and don't get more character without open returned feelings ;;.
I'm glad you liked it x3!
I also love to write/read about the small things in a relationship :D.
>/////< Thank you!!! Ahh,yes,I messed up a bit at the end @,@. I only realized that after posting |D
Gahhh,don't flatter me so damn much <3! I shall do that :D.
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