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[cirstea]

Mar 05, 2008 20:28

AN APPLE A DAY
by daisy_chan

( [cirstea] An Apple A Day )

Comments 11

anonymous March 24 2008, 08:00:38 UTC

The opening line hooked me, and the rest proved to be just as whimsical and random as one could wish for. When reveals are over, can we start bribing you to write more like this? :)

[camerin]

anonymous March 24 2008, 08:38:18 UTC

'Twenty Illnesses Fuji Never Had, but Made Tezuka Treat Him for Anyway'? I like it.

[cirstea]

anonymous March 26 2008, 06:17:35 UTC

Oh, oh, oh! I love it!

YOU SHOULD TOTALLY WRITE THIS.

[adamczak]

daisy_chan February 10 2009, 01:53:39 UTC

That is a horrible idea. And as such, don't rule out my writing it XPP

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uminohikari March 25 2008, 22:54:56 UTC

That was absolutely brilliant. Fuji's ...uniqueness is really written well, and everyone's reactions is perfect. *dies of laughter* I adored Yuuta's many '...'s and Eiji's hysteria and it was all generally so much ♥

daisy_chan February 10 2009, 01:55:14 UTC

Everyone suffers under Fuji's "uniqueness." I'm glad you enjoyed it. <3

anonymous March 26 2008, 06:27:08 UTC

Best first line ever! I love this so so much. It's hilarious and everyone's reactions are perfect.

He could maybe even talk Tezuka into rubbing his bald, cancerous head with hot oil. He would sort of look like a tennis ball. Tezuka might enjoy that.

AHAHAHAHAHA! Awesome.

This is the best thing I've read all day and I pretty much spent all day reading fic.

A couple typos I noticed (I automatically edit as I read; I can't help it):

Fuji believed there is nothing sharper than a crayon
there was nothing sharper

If he decided to go for chemotherapy, he might lose his hair, but Fuji felt pretty optimist about it.
felt pretty optimistic about it

He pulled away from Fuji could properly get Tezuka's belt under.
get his belt undone?

made his moan appreciatively.
made him moan

[adamczak]

daisy_chan February 10 2009, 01:57:48 UTC

Thanks for the edits. I wrote it in a rush at the last minute. I'm going through it now (so, so very late), so I can post it to my fic comm, so this will be really helpful in that process.

Thanks for the comment. ^^

anonymous March 29 2008, 00:53:41 UTC

This was incredibly lovely and attention-grabbing. :D

[kirilenko]

Why am I not surprised that Fuji fakes cancer?

daisy_chan February 10 2009, 01:59:56 UTC

Fuji would like to point out that he totally had cancer. And if Tezuka doesn't believe that, than he should conduct extensive internal testing. >D

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. ^__^