This part right here: “Well Lovi, I’ve kind of liked you for a while. And I wasn’t going to say anything because I didn’t want you to hate me but then Gilbert stole my pants in the locker room-"
That made my day. Oh Spain, why are you so awesome?
Oh, and quick catch if you wanted to know: you wrote Prussia instead of Gilbert in the second paragraph of the scene change. Totally not a big deal and I'm actually really surprised I caught it (because I interchange their names all the time in my head). But yeah, not a big deal at all but just in case you wanted to know. =)
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Pfftt Gilbert xD
Also -> “Um uh….” Antonio’s head whipped around, “Francis I don’t think its working!”
I love this 8D
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Oh Spain. Haha.
<333
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Thanks for reading~
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That made my day. Oh Spain, why are you so awesome?
Oh, and quick catch if you wanted to know: you wrote Prussia instead of Gilbert in the second paragraph of the scene change. Totally not a big deal and I'm actually really surprised I caught it (because I interchange their names all the time in my head). But yeah, not a big deal at all but just in case you wanted to know. =)
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I'm glad you liked it ^^
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