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serenity11love July 3 2010, 23:00:14 UTC
“Relax, relax!” Gilbert said, “We’re almost done and when we are, your car will have been blessed by my awesome!”

Pfftt Gilbert xD

Also -> “Um uh….” Antonio’s head whipped around, “Francis I don’t think its working!”

I love this 8D

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ghibli22 July 4 2010, 13:06:24 UTC
Lol, I'm happy I had some decent lines in there :3

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linglingpanda July 4 2010, 01:28:10 UTC
Aahahaha~ -dying of laughter- T-This fanfic! Oh! So many quotes! I can't pick just one! -continues to die of laughter-

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ghibli22 July 4 2010, 13:05:24 UTC
XD I'm glad you found it so enjoyable

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mehemustache July 4 2010, 01:48:47 UTC
Awwwww~!!

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ghibli22 July 4 2010, 13:04:57 UTC
Thanks for the read :D

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mew_magic5 July 4 2010, 04:17:14 UTC
"But either way Antonio would see something shiny and be back to his old self in a matter of minutes."

Oh Spain. Haha.

<333

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ghibli22 July 4 2010, 13:04:38 UTC
We all love him <3 He's such a lovely piece of fail xD
Thanks for reading~

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sozuki17 July 4 2010, 06:55:50 UTC
This part right here: “Well Lovi, I’ve kind of liked you for a while. And I wasn’t going to say anything because I didn’t want you to hate me but then Gilbert stole my pants in the locker room-"

That made my day. Oh Spain, why are you so awesome?

Oh, and quick catch if you wanted to know: you wrote Prussia instead of Gilbert in the second paragraph of the scene change. Totally not a big deal and I'm actually really surprised I caught it (because I interchange their names all the time in my head). But yeah, not a big deal at all but just in case you wanted to know. =)

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ghibli22 July 4 2010, 13:03:43 UTC
Thanks a ton! Will be fixed momentarily...

I'm glad you liked it ^^

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