Applauds! Congrats on finishing your beast. It was wonderful and scary. Of all the MLCs, this one seemed the most real, with all it's awkward moments between the characters. Most of all I am glad Hermione and Severus are happy, but Severus is right to question the future of those children, truely inncocent victims of the law you parlayed into a horror.
I still stand that the kiss in chapter 16 is wonderful. I read it when I need a shot of romance. Also wonderful is the shift in Hermione's view, and it came about so naturally.
You don't know how much that means to me. Really, yours is the biggest compliment I could ever receive for this.
I had always planned to mention what would become of the people affected, but if I were to be explicit, this fic would then become twice or even three times as long as it is. And really, that isn't Severus and Hermione's story. In my mind, they don't ever have children, though I do imagine a future where Hermione finds a way to counter the Adulterous Charm...
Chapter 16 is a good kiss and one of my favourite chapters, though I actually think 28 beats it out. To me, that's truly the turning point in the romance. I'm also still shocked at how characters completely took over in Chapter 33. Really, that wasn't the direction I had planned on taking, but in the end, I think it was necessary. Sometimes things write themselves for a reason, I suppose.
Thank you so much for all your comments and encouragements through this whole process. You're one of the ones that made me come back to this and finish it, even when I was
I really enjoyed this story it's been one of my favorites since I started reading (and watching for updates) sometime in 2003. This is definitely one I'll be re-reading again and again. Thank you!
Thank you for this beautiful epilogue! I enjoyed it very much... And how are you feeling after you have finished the story up to new ones *hint, hint* :)
I'm not sure how I feel about taking on another mammoth project like this, perhaps in the future if I get inspired by something. I've got a few minature bunnies drifting around in my brain, but I don't really want to start something big and new when there is a book looming.
That and I have a fic exchange piece to write by the end of June along with an ongoing 100quills claim that I really need to dedicate more time to.
It is such a light feeling to have finally finished this fic. Thanks for reading!
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I still stand that the kiss in chapter 16 is wonderful. I read it when I need a shot of romance. Also wonderful is the shift in Hermione's view, and it came about so naturally.
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I had always planned to mention what would become of the people affected, but if I were to be explicit, this fic would then become twice or even three times as long as it is. And really, that isn't Severus and Hermione's story. In my mind, they don't ever have children, though I do imagine a future where Hermione finds a way to counter the Adulterous Charm...
Chapter 16 is a good kiss and one of my favourite chapters, though I actually think 28 beats it out. To me, that's truly the turning point in the romance. I'm also still shocked at how characters completely took over in Chapter 33. Really, that wasn't the direction I had planned on taking, but in the end, I think it was necessary. Sometimes things write themselves for a reason, I suppose.
Thank you so much for all your comments and encouragements through this whole process. You're one of the ones that made me come back to this and finish it, even when I was
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I really enjoyed this story it's been one of my favorites since I started reading (and watching for updates) sometime in 2003. This is definitely one I'll be re-reading again and again. Thank you!
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I enjoyed it very much...
And how are you feeling after you have finished the story up to new ones *hint, hint* :)
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I'm not sure how I feel about taking on another mammoth project like this, perhaps in the future if I get inspired by something. I've got a few minature bunnies drifting around in my brain, but I don't really want to start something big and new when there is a book looming.
That and I have a fic exchange piece to write by the end of June along with an ongoing 100quills claim that I really need to dedicate more time to.
It is such a light feeling to have finally finished this fic. Thanks for reading!
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