Ah, G! You danced on that bestiality edge in a most plausible fashion, but didn't go over! I loved that Hermione's actions were human/cat ... nice clawing at the ground, for example, and that Charlie was perceptive enough to 'get it' in all senses of the words.
The core of the story wrote itself very quickly, but it was a tough haul through the details. I really didn't want to push this into squicky territory or lose the smut altogether. Actually there is a completely smut-free version that I spent weeks banging my head against the wall over.
Charlie was the natural choice of course and probably a lot more liberal about these things. Can you imagine that with Ron? It would terrify the life out of him!
I thought you handled it very well. Without the Polyjuice incident it could have been something else altogether, but you were able to blend the event with the consequences beautifully.
Ron would run for the attic and the ghoul's company! He really wouldn't know how to handle the situation at all. Harry might though -- he's been possessed by something beyond his control before. At least he'd be sympathetic, as would Ginny I think.
Still, I loved your choice of Charlie for the story.
Harry would still be overwhelmed by it and probably back off completely where Charlie allowed himself to press forward. I think it would really disturb him to see his friend so out of control like that. I just don't picture Harry as the rough sex sort... at least not in this sort of context.
We all love Charlie! Do you realize just how many of cork's icons are on this page? He he he... I got one too!
Oh wow. That just... well, it worked so well! It certainly didn't come across as dub-con to me. It was more like two people adapting to and accepting something a little different.
I think my worries about the dub-con come from how many rewrites there were of this. A couple versions were much MUCH less fluffy than this one ended up.
Charlie has a knack for being in the right place at the right time. He he he.
Would you believe I worked out all the scientific logic for hormone inhibitors and such. This is what you get when you take Anthropology of Sex courses at Uni.
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Charlie was the natural choice of course and probably a lot more liberal about these things. Can you imagine that with Ron? It would terrify the life out of him!
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Ron would run for the attic and the ghoul's company! He really wouldn't know how to handle the situation at all. Harry might though -- he's been possessed by something beyond his control before. At least he'd be sympathetic, as would Ginny I think.
Still, I loved your choice of Charlie for the story.
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We all love Charlie! Do you realize just how many of cork's icons are on this page? He he he... I got one too!
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Nice work.
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I'm glad you liked it.
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I like that Hermione has an animalistic side in her,too, and that it is the best to go for it rather than suppresing it.
So glad, Charlie was there to help. *g*
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Would you believe I worked out all the scientific logic for hormone inhibitors and such. This is what you get when you take Anthropology of Sex courses at Uni.
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I am only RP'ing but I research the studies of my characters and even topics that eventually come up in a discussion.
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