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FOL short fiction
Apr 27, 2009 00:25
Title: The Best Man
Rating: G
A/N: A short piece that assumes familiarity with characters in my other stories.
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wolfemeister
April 27 2009, 15:11:08 UTC
Cute and really well written considering that you didn't use any names until the end.
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gfaynefan
April 28 2009, 02:17:33 UTC
Thanks W. Sometimes I like to try these writing exercises (like not using names) just to amuse myself. I probably shouldn't post them to the FOL community;they are sort of self-indulgent
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wolfemeister
April 28 2009, 17:54:43 UTC
By no means, it was fun and a good peak at the future in your story line. I love your work in general and this kind of thing is even more fun.
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curiousleigh
April 28 2009, 01:44:23 UTC
I liked it. :)
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gfaynefan
April 28 2009, 02:18:46 UTC
Thanks. It was a quick,one time experiment.
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quatorz
April 28 2009, 18:54:43 UTC
That was cool! I'm glad I checked. I need to be immediately alerted when you write a new fic.
I liked the lack of names until the end-and then it was Tootie Jr. and Jo's godson. That was cool.
You just opened up a new canon there. You could have the continuing adventures of the FOl offspring. Fayne!verse: the Next Generation. ;)
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moiracw
May 3 2009, 00:16:48 UTC
This was really well written. It was cool that you didn't use any names till the end, made all the more enjoyable.
I agree with quatorz though, need to know when you do new FOL fics ;)
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gfaynefan
May 3 2009, 11:31:43 UTC
I appreciate the comment. Thanks. I'll be sure to let you and Q know if I have something worth posting.
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I liked the lack of names until the end-and then it was Tootie Jr. and Jo's godson. That was cool.
You just opened up a new canon there. You could have the continuing adventures of the FOl offspring. Fayne!verse: the Next Generation. ;)
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I agree with quatorz though, need to know when you do new FOL fics ;)
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