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lyssie in getyourtoaster

Fic: Lit Up

May 01, 2006 00:07

Disclaimer: Not mine. Rating: 18+ lesbians, sex, etc. Non-graphic.
Spoilers: er... Up through Final Cut.
Pairings: Starbuck/Dualla, Starbuck/Boomer, Starbuck/D'Anna
This's for voleuse. Sorry for the slight delay in posting.
Length: 1,600+ (I, er, ended up hitting all three prompts)
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p:kara/three, by:lyssie, 2:kara, r:r, .story, p:kara/sharon, p:kara/dee

Comments 8

thenewhope May 1 2006, 21:12:30 UTC

all three of these little scenes are great, though I particularly love the Kara/Boomer. you totally made me like the idea of Dee/Kara for the space of that scene, which is saying something. ;)

your light, clear writing does a lot to fill in just the right details, and your dialog is spot on.

thanks for participating in this round!

lyssie May 2 2006, 02:02:52 UTC

Thank you. I found myself liking Kara/Boomer more than I thought I would (not to mention being unable to leave it completely angst-free. sigh). HAH. I'm disturbed at the idea of Dee/Kara, actually, because there's so much, um, weirdness you could play with, considering bits of canon (like, Dee comparing Kara to Lee and finding Lee less, um, interesting. *cough*)

Your lovely feedback has made my week. Thank you =)

zahdahe May 6 2006, 18:35:37 UTC

Yes yes. Loved the Kara/Dee one loved loved it. Can we please have some more, with even more detail chuckle. I've recently started seeing them as a couple. Keep it up they are all lovely.

lyssie May 7 2006, 01:51:30 UTC

Thank you. =)

I'm pondering it, as, well, I've just been reminded that Dee is veryvery hot, and, er, yes. *distracted*

nenya_kanadka May 19 2006, 07:01:07 UTC

Hehe. My thoughts exactly. I do hear the objections about Lee. But Dee is gorgeous.

And I think you do an awesome Starbuck. You never let her get soft and mushy when she shouldn't be. Very nice. Also, I note the frequent use of the word "mock". Heh.

lyssie June 10 2006, 16:31:58 UTC

'mock' is my favorite word, I think. After frak. Hrm. *distracted*

Thank you. =)

And. Dude. Mushy Starbuck disturbs me. I know she's emotionally vulnerable, but, but, just no. There are some things she won't do, some places she won't go.

zahdahe June 10 2006, 16:17:31 UTC

just re-reading the comment you sent me. Oh yes! get hot vvvvv hot and especially distracted. We are waiting and it going to be dammmmnn goooooooood.

Sorry pervy took me over. Please can I make a suggestion, Alpha Dee/Sub Kara and force them to enjoy it.

lololololololoolllllllllllllooooooooooooool!

lyssie June 10 2006, 16:34:26 UTC

*laughs* Thank you, though. I've actually got to finish at least two other fics before I can prod at Dee and Kara again. But, soon? I think?

HAH. Er, I can try (the thing is, a dom/sub isn't hard to enjoy, but it's not something that you can force on characters without it, ah, seeming out of character, actually)--my main problem is having difficulty seeing Kara as a sub, though I've seen it done it rarely rings true.

Hrm. I have ideas, though. I think. *wanders off*