In September 2010 Carlyn provided a link to the complete story, as the story is incomplete in the download files.
http://getithere.livejournal.com/1384910.html#comments Unfortunately the link she provided isn't working anymore. Could someone please email me the story or has a working download link? Thanks!
Edit: New download link
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=MYSM1TS5 Thank you, ipitydafool!