F/V/K: Quick Reverse Turn and a Triple Jive

Aug 25, 2006 21:39

There are betas, and then there is the BOMB*. This story owes everything it is to my beta, china_shop, who pushed and pushed and pushed, and when I was at the end of my rope-pushed a little more.

*Big 'Ol Mean Beta

142. Fraser/Kowalski/Vecchio - Kowalski comes home to find Vecchio and Fraser having sex in the living room.

Quick Reverse Turn and a Triple Jive )

fraser/kowalski/vecchio, author: aerye

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slidellra August 26 2006, 02:09:02 UTC
holy shit! this makes me giddy with joy. the sexual aftermath is so sensual, the characters so spot-on, and i love love love writers acknowledging the emotional pitfalls of the three-way and then making it all make sense after all.

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slidellra August 26 2006, 03:04:53 UTC
(still feeling gush-y) yes, i adore how even after hearing the other boys declare their love for him (which could so easily have been a big old ego-stroke), the whole experience is still a slap in the face for kowalski. realizing for the first time that he isn't the center of the relationship, that they love each other too. and he's tough enough and brave enough to deal and love them anyway. lovely!

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pearl_o August 26 2006, 02:14:44 UTC
Oh, FRASER.

(Hi, I know you're not surprised that's my answer to, like, everything. Sorry.)

Oh, god. Ray pressed his hand against his mouth to keep all the sounds he wanted to make from escaping. Now was not the time to lose it. He needed to-to get back out without them hearing, and then turn around and come right back in, like it was the first time. Friday night, late for dinner, and a whole weekend ahead of them.

Man, I totally love the way you do emotion, making it real without overstating.

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ruthless1 August 26 2006, 02:23:20 UTC
schmoop city! That was awesome! I haven't really been able to quite "get" the three of them together so far but you made me really see how it would actually work. But it WAS schmoopy.
*hands you winning schmoop points*

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sageness August 26 2006, 02:25:19 UTC
She is the bomb, and this is gutwrenching and wonderful, and omg Fraser & Vecchio's honesty with each other in contrast with RayK's eavesdropping. And, god, they all love each other so much!! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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zeenell August 26 2006, 02:47:14 UTC
...wow

just

wow

this is. Beautiful and sexy and beautiful *bookmarks*

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