Comments | getfraserlaid: Get a Grip on my Boy Racer Rollbar by Loz

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Get a Grip on my Boy Racer Rollbar by Loz

Aug 25, 2006 15:25

Title: Get a Grip on my Boy Racer Rollbar
Pairing: Fraser/Vecchio
Rating: NC-17
Author: Loz (lozenger8)
Notes: Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. This is the first explicitly porntastic story I’ve written and I’m a jitterbug. The fic is third person Ray P.O.V and pretty much just smut. The title is a line from "I'm in Love with my Car" by Queen ( Read more... )

author: lozenger, fraser/vecchio

Comments 22

joandarck August 25 2006, 06:39:55 UTC

Ray knew that what he thought was happening was definitely not happening. Sure, the tension between them hadn’t always been car related and yeah, there were times when he questioned whether Fraser had any concept of personal space and knew he had no problem if he didn’t, but Fraser was not that kind of guy. Fraser was every other type of guy. Fraser was a guy unto himself.

Seriously class. That was great - yay!

lozenger8 August 25 2006, 06:40:58 UTC

Really? It wasn't... horrendously bad?!

joandarck August 25 2006, 06:42:09 UTC

Loz! Bite your tongue! Of course not.

lozenger8 August 25 2006, 06:42:56 UTC

Okay, good. Thank you! Thank you! (No, really!)

llassah August 25 2006, 08:38:58 UTC

Cool! That was pretty darn hot,and this line

I think we better stay here, Ray,” Fraser said. Ray’s relief made itself known in a loosening of his shoulders. “After all, the backseat looks big enough for the both of us.”

was such a complete surprise, and so weirdly Fraserish! In fact, that goes for the rest of the fic, in the best possible way!

*hands over cookies*
Llassah

lozenger8 August 25 2006, 11:52:45 UTC

Thank you!

:D

aingeal8c August 25 2006, 09:31:32 UTC

Hee very nice! Very nice indeed.

For your first time writing the NC-17 stuff this was really good. Ah Fraser you old seducer.

;-)

lozenger8 August 25 2006, 11:52:06 UTC

Thank you so much.

Did you notice the closet line? That was for you :D (Since you're the one who made me slash Fraser/Vecchio in the first place, you sly thing.)

aingeal8c August 25 2006, 14:53:24 UTC

Did you notice the closet line? That was for you :D

Yay! Thanks. I love a closet mention.

(Since you're the one who made me slash Fraser/Vecchio in the first place, you sly thing.)

Mwhahaha! My mission is complete.

whitepuppy August 25 2006, 13:18:07 UTC

Wonderfu and hot! I love the story, and the way you set it up.

lozenger8 August 26 2006, 06:02:56 UTC

Thank you :D

sansets August 25 2006, 16:31:11 UTC

Seductive!Fraser! I dearly *heart* seductive Fraser, because that is one of my favorite incarnations. I don't know if it is inherent in the character himself or because he is played by Paul Gross, but it always delights me when people choose to explore it.

This is the first explicitly porntastic story I’ve written

As someone who is incapable of writting effective porn, I take my hat off for you, because it really doesn't show that this is your first time writting NC-17. Kudos! (And personally, I think that writting effective sex is one of the single hardest things to write. Period. Errmm ... no pun intended! :-D)

lozenger8 August 26 2006, 06:05:28 UTC

Thank you so much. You make me feel a lot better about it.