Battered. H/W.

[carnivalesque]

Title: Battered.
Author: skulling
Pairing/Rating: House/Wilson/Pancakes. NC-17.
Words: 5,000.
Notes: I went nuts. I’m sorry. This is incredibly long, but I guarantee you, it’s worth the read. Unbetaed, so there might be typoes, but I’ve been working on it forever, so I’m quite happy with the flow, etc.
Prompt: 126. House/Wilson - Pancakes.
Summary: WILLSON

Comments

[nuclearfootball]

All right, I think I can say with all confidence that this is the best "first-time" fic I have read. Fun + hot = win.

There are so many lines I love that I would basically be copypasting the whole story to point them all out, but I picked one: he wanted House to take it from him, if he wanted it so badly. *shiver*

And the image of House giggling and happy, shielding himself in a food fight--awesome. Aaaand the image of Wilson, covered in pancake batter, shirtless and holding up his undone jeans? ...........

Man, you rule. :D

If you get a duplicate reply in your e-mail I apologize; I used the wrong tag to close the italics and it just looked stupid. I must have been....distracted somehow. ;)

OHMYGOD I hope this is funny to you and not annoying. Third time, just because I don't want you to have stupid-looking comment on your awesoeme fic. HOW DO I WROTE SIMPLE HTML??????

[carnivalesque]

Thank you so much!

I liked the image of House giggling and shielding himself, too. xD It was just too fun.

Foodfight sex ftw.

[tripperfunster]

I'll try to reply just once. *wink*

Very nice stuff! Something about H/W and food fights just seems so right! Perhaps they need a nice shower to get all that excess *cough* batter off! :D

[carnivalesque]

Agreed.

And, thank you! :D

[imfreakinorange]

SO THAT soo hot!! sorry, i think i posted twice...
OMG! food fight and house thinking about whether he is the bottom!! EXCELLENT!! now it's House turn right?? *wink*

[carnivalesque]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it, darling. I enjoyed writing it.

[lady_twatterby]

Fantsatic. Plain fantastic. Very, very hot. <3

[lady_twatterby]

Fantsatic.

Look, you've even robbed me of the ability to spell XD

[carnivalesque]

LULZ. i r sorriez.

Glad you liked it tho!! :D Thanks!!

[jouse]

SO GOOD AND YUMMY. FoodFight!sex FTW!

For a moment there I thought you're going to leave House and us all angsting, but no (:

[carnivalesque]

xD I was in the middle of it and kind of lost, and realized that it should end that way, and then I was fine.

Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for the comment!