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indigocat September 20 2011, 00:21:51 UTC
I would hate to be Neal when Elizabeth gets her hands on Neal.

Beautiful, bittersweet story.

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secretsolitaire September 20 2011, 03:26:58 UTC
Ooh, that hurt. Enjoyed it though!

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ivorysilk September 20 2011, 03:44:25 UTC
Ouch. That was so, so tragic and had this feeling of being inevitable.

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germanjj September 22 2011, 20:44:34 UTC
I was actually planning a way more positive ending, but they just kept drifting in that direction.... thank you for leaving a comment!

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miss_morange September 20 2011, 05:42:12 UTC
That cracking noise is the sound of my heart breaking...

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germanjj September 22 2011, 20:43:19 UTC
aww, thank you! ... I think ;)

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micheleeeex September 24 2011, 05:34:39 UTC
Ouch, my heart :( This was fantastic!

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