Comments | germanjj: Closed Doors

germanjj

Closed Doors - epilogue

Feb 21, 2009 00:01

( The trouble with love is, it doesn't care how fast you fall )

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blueeyedliz February 20 2009, 23:16:26 UTC

Beautifully told story, hon. It was such an awesome joy to beta for you and read each chapter.

You have the most wonderful lyric style to your writing and the angst between the boys was so intense...and you were kind enough to let me play in your sandbox too. *glee*

Also I love this missing scene - because you totally pulled the comfy rug out from under our feet with this and I think that's great.

blueeyedliz February 20 2009, 23:17:28 UTC

(lyrical) - I need someone to beta my comments, lol.

germanjj February 20 2009, 23:20:27 UTC

awww, thank you soo much! *hugs you* it was a pleasure to work with you too!! having a beta is one of the main reasons why I started writing in the first place!

And yeah, I wanted to twist the story again, well, just a little. Have you ever read Christopher Rice (son of Anne)? He's one of my favorite authors and he's writing so intense and the epilogue was a little inspired by one of his books.

looking forward to working with you again, hon!!

blueeyedliz February 21 2009, 07:31:10 UTC

I've read Anne Rice before but not Christopher Rice - is there one of his books which you would recommend for someone new to his work? It'd be cool to give his stuff a try because I've always enjoyed the Anne Rice I've read.

*hugs*

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calijirl5150 February 20 2009, 23:21:02 UTC

Oh that was sneaky - gotta love that CHad :D

germanjj February 21 2009, 16:46:21 UTC

hehe, yeah, I tried to put some tiny little hints in the story, but I love that the twist worked! *grins* thank you so much for reading and yay chad!

maggies_one February 21 2009, 00:39:54 UTC

a ... little... different,so.
sneaky, definitiv sneaky.
I have to admit I would have gone without just perfectly maybe even better, not, that I have a problem with them being cousins or family or realted or whatever it's just... sneaky ^^ ... BUT I just got to love Chad since your stories :D

germanjj February 21 2009, 09:44:59 UTC

yeah, sorry, at first, I planned to put some warnings before that epilogue, but then everyone was like: "who care's if they're related?" and I thought it wasn't neccessary, but maybe I should have?
yeah, and I know I was sneaky, but I couldn't stop myself to give this story another twist ;D
oh, and yay me! for making you like Chad!! ;D

maggies_one February 21 2009, 12:22:39 UTC

Exactly! Nobody cares if ther're are related or not, me neither. It wasn't really about that. Actually I sorta feel way much better about that ending after one night sleeping *gg* Most of all I'm pretty sure it was the surprise 'cause right now I just love the idea, that they weren't as 'invisible' as they thought :D And of course it was the right thing to do for Mek and Mac I think I just wouldn't had have to know if it was positiv or negativ ;)

ou_peachus February 21 2009, 00:54:09 UTC

no u didn't. Uh-uh.

omg. LMAO

Chad saves the day? LOL - and by cheating. I *love* it.

And..*cough*, guess they really are Kissing Cousins. tehe!

All in all, I really enjoyed this fic. Thank you so much for sharing with us. I'll probably post about it on my journal soon.

germanjj February 21 2009, 18:32:27 UTC

oh, yeah I did!!

and hey, Chad had to use his natural skills - cheating!! it's what he can do best, but for his friend, it'll actualy do something good! ;D

thank you so much for reading and commenting!! *is happy*

abx_journal February 21 2009, 01:32:18 UTC

OH, how unexpected! I love that Chad helped out and however it happened I'm glad that the boys ended up together.

germanjj February 21 2009, 22:47:24 UTC

hehe, thank you so much!! and Chad saved the day, or better, their love!! ;D