Week 12 Comment on Sommers page

[georginaf]

hey hun I really enjoyed reading this piece it kinda made me question my own experiences where I had felt similar emotions explored in your poem. What really stood out for me was the simile "Like an old fashioned gentleman Trapped in the wrong century"- this was very creative and indeed drew me a mental image in my mind. so well done I am not usually a poetic fan but your poem won my votes. I had a keep browse through your page and seems to me you enjoy writing with alot of creativity what i do is i combine my creativeness and criticalness too in the one post. (You dont have to do this its just a suggestion what you are already doing is great) May be a critical note could be attatched or just a small description of the actual poem itself because it could help others really understand the meaning you try to convey - but overall I love your work especially the descriptive language you convey.

Well done

From Georgina 0x0x ps thanks for the comment earlier much appreciated.

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