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"Jerk: An Epic MMOM Story," 3/3

May 05, 2011 12:54

Title: Jerk: An Epic MMOM Story, 3/3
Author: geonncannon
Fandom: Original (m/m, m/f, f/f, multiples and combinations)
Words: 20,033
Date: May 8
Author's Note: This is for moonlettuce, who opened up the mmom house and invited us to let all our characters masturbate in it. This is in lieu of offering to help clean up in June, because ew.
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original, writing

Comments 14

theradicalrad May 5 2011, 21:50:16 UTC

O_O So. Much. Porn.

I loved this with a burning passion. It was really sweet how you wove in their connection and love during the epic threesome. The only thing better than some beautifully written pwp is emotional, beautifully written pwp. <3

geonncannon May 5 2011, 21:52:38 UTC

I know, right? I had to space it out over a week or so or I'd have exploded from the smuttiness of it all. ;-D

And thank you! I thought that if I was going to write something epic like this, I'd put the words to good use. An emotional polyamorous relationship. Gotta love that! And I do admit, a lot of the first few thousands words was just me kind of free-writing. No plan, no map, just seeing what happened. I didn't even know the Jerk was bi until his boyfriend woke up. ;-D

moonlettuce May 5 2011, 23:03:57 UTC

I am completely and utterly in love with Casey right now :D

And Jack would indeed know what to do!

And I loved the little mentions of things like X-Men and Tremors (a Tremors t-shirt is absolutely dressing up). I've no idea if you catered them for me, but I'm totally claiming that you did (even if you didn't).

20,000 words of wank! And it's all mine! Bweeeeeeeee!

::dances you around::

geonncannon May 5 2011, 23:06:32 UTC

How can you not love Casey?! I fell in love with her a littlewhole ton while writing it. That's the main reason I switched to her POV. I wanted it to be all the Jerk, but I loved her too much to let her go off-camera for too long :D

I did indeed! I stalked your LJ a little bit for the little things that would make you bounce a little higher. :D

It's allllll yours! Even on AO3, I think. I'm so glad you liked it! I was worried about the sex scene, but it was necessary after that much masturbation/teasing. ~g~

xocoatldreams May 5 2011, 23:32:40 UTC

20k of wank! *bows in awe* and it was hot!

geonncannon May 5 2011, 23:34:16 UTC

I tried my bestest to make sure every scene had something incredibly hot in it. I think my biggest success was the matching sweaters... and putting together the puzzle... phew. I'll be in my bunk...

;-D

mulder200 May 6 2011, 01:27:25 UTC

Wow! Now that was seriously hot! Yow!

geonncannon May 6 2011, 01:28:17 UTC

Thank you! I was worried it might collapse under its own weight. ;-D

teryl_brat42 May 6 2011, 16:29:47 UTC

Holy smokes. *fans self* I don't even like cock and this was hot.

geonncannon May 6 2011, 16:31:47 UTC

Thank you! I tend to be a very narcissistic cock-lover. I like my own just fine, but outside of that... not so much. ;-D I'm glad I conveyed it well, though! ~tips hat~

(I'm trying to counter all the boysex in this story by using as many lesbian icons as possible in my replies. ;-D)