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gentlehobbit

Doctor Who fic: The Trial of Ten, 10/20

Sep 29, 2011 05:31

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gentlehobbit September 30 2011, 11:34:59 UTC

Yes, Ten has been given a bit of relief. I loved writing that part. After all the angst and drama, that gentle moment was welcome. :)

fannishliss September 29 2011, 14:46:39 UTC

i felt like I was holding my breath throughout this chapter. Tense!

gentlehobbit September 30 2011, 11:38:56 UTC

I was a little confused when I first read your comment because I thought, 'But... Ten got some help.' How could it have been tense? Then the commenter below said the same thing. I re-read the chapter and I started to see it from a different perspective. Thank you! I love it when people lead me through to seeing something a new way. :)

a_phoenixdragon September 30 2011, 00:37:03 UTC

WOW...this was intense. I love how you made Eleven so calm yet intimidating to his accusers though they fail to see themselves as such. And the quiet moment with Ten, Rose and the Doctor (and Martha's loving vigil) was just perfect. Thank you!! Thank you, thank you!! I'm so excited to see what happens next!!

*HUGS*

gentlehobbit September 30 2011, 11:41:08 UTC

Thank you. I loved writing Eleven that way. And that quiet moment... that was one of my favourite bits to write.

*hugs you back*

charlottetrips October 29 2011, 02:40:47 UTC

randomly...can I snag your icon? Pweeeeesse???

a_phoenixdragon October 29 2011, 02:42:18 UTC

Ohh, yes!! All icons is shareable - have at, sweetie!

*HUGS*

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tempusdominus10 October 3 2011, 16:14:17 UTC

Jack Jack I've discovered I'm an arsehole and I suck badly and I need your help to find Mister Psycho and I got Rose and MArtha with me and where's the Ice cream? and don't say it.

hAHAHAH

charlottetrips October 29 2011, 02:42:09 UTC

Loved this Chapter. Loving the whole story! Reading it throughout the day if you couldn't tell :P

The whole moment between Ten, Eleven and Rose was lovely and oh so needed. I was feeling a little confused as to where Rose stood about the clone and the Doctor but seeing this really helped clarify it and soothe my Ten/Rose heart :)

gentlehobbit October 30 2011, 03:52:52 UTC

I can understand why you were feeling some confusion. After all, even though Rose made a choice at Bad Wolf Bay, the history between all three of them makes for some confusing feelings. Even though none of them would ever be disrespectful of one another's feelings, there may be something to be sorted out and resolved. Rose has been trying, but Eleven hasn't been very helpful...