Eh, considering that this was page 23 or 24 of 30+ in increasingly illegible handwriting, a typo or two is to be expected, I think. Thanks for the catch!
Thanks! I was rather surprised, I must admit, when I noticed how long it'd been since new fic was posted at SA--let alone the last time I posted. I'm hoping to get some more done this summer.
It's nice to see some new Gentle_Edgar Stargate fic. I really appreciate the way you convey entire layers of characterization and action with an offhand a seemingly offhand comment or so.
"So when Helia offers him a single tenancy, because of his mother’s blood, John says No again, and Atlantis- Atlantis shows herself to be more than mere machinery. Then he sits and teaches Ronon and Teyla gin rummy while everyone else runs around trying to find some alternative to the inevitable."
tells us what happened about as well as an actual episode of SGA would have, complete with Rodney recovering his bossy-ness
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"...scarcely can even thinks about..."
I think that the sentence would read better as: "...scarcely even thinks about..."
Just as good the second time!
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"So when Helia offers him a single tenancy, because of his mother’s blood, John says No again, and Atlantis- Atlantis shows herself to be more than mere machinery. Then he sits and teaches Ronon and Teyla gin rummy while everyone else runs around trying to find some alternative to the inevitable."
tells us what happened about as well as an actual episode of SGA would have, complete with Rodney recovering his bossy-ness ( ... )
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