nepenthe

Jul 27, 2009 21:41

for gen_drabble; Nepenthe, "the one that chases away sorrow".

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“Why don’t you meditate?” Teer asks one morning, gently incurious.

“I do,” John says (lies), twiddling a grass-stem.

“You sleep,” she corrects, her expression sweet but humorless. (Nobody ever really smiles here.)

“I don’t want to ascend,” he says; don’t want to leave them behind, he doesn’t ( Read more... )

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jennytork July 28 2009, 02:02:38 UTC
"...do not ask for love once more..."

Beautiful!

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bratfarrar July 29 2009, 00:22:12 UTC
Thank you.

I wasn't aware of the song when I wrote this, but it fits surprising well.

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kriadydragon July 28 2009, 02:10:24 UTC
That was lovely.

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bratfarrar July 29 2009, 00:25:08 UTC
Thank you. ^_^

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tridget July 28 2009, 02:32:27 UTC
Very Sweet and beautiful.

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bratfarrar July 29 2009, 00:25:58 UTC
Thanks.

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nickygabriel July 28 2009, 12:25:38 UTC
“There’s more than one way to abandon someone,”
That was beautiful! Thank you!

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bratfarrar July 29 2009, 00:26:43 UTC
Well, it took three drafts so I'm glad it came out well. Thank you. ^_^

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