comment on reilly's journal for week 3
This week i commented on rob reillys livejournal, found at URL: http://reilly88.livejournal.com/16136.html?view=20488
Wow Reilly, a most powerful sonnet! The structure, rhythm and rhyme pattern is perfect, and the word choice is fantastic. I think you really capture the beauty of this girl with rich descriptions, "Cherry Red", "forever flowing". I am envious of the writing talent you have which shines through so clearly in this poem! Nice work =)