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[genesisgrey]

I got addicted to the 1sentence community. So, I decided to do a Gravitation one for, and I know this will shock everyone, Mika and Tohma. I attempted to make it a coherent bit of writing, and succeeded in parts and not so much in other. :P

Anyway, rated T for naughty implications and use of the word 'sex'.

Comments

[imayb1]

The 30-34 lines kind of throw-off the overall theme but I'm really impressed. Was it hard to link all those bits together? Interesting writing exercise. Do you plan to shape this into something more, like a one-shot or chaptered fic? I love the desperation of the characters, here.

[genesisgrey]

It was more difficult than I thought it would be, which is why some of those lines don't quite fit. (Sing nearly killed me. :P ) I'm not sure if I'm going to make this into something more. I want to write something for Mika and Tohma, 'cause I haven't in a while, but I just don't know what.... Though I have been wondering about their kid recently.

[imayb1]

Yes, I can see "sing" was a tough one to fit in!

I have been wondering about their kid, too. I was really hoping MM would throw us a bone in the webtracks, but it seems those are on hold until she has finished her doujinshi.

[genesisgrey]

Have Mika or the child been mentioned at all?

[imayb1]

Not at all. :( It's as if they don't exist.

[genesisgrey]

That's what I was afraid of. :(