FIC: Untitled

[genclay]

Title:  Untitled
Characters/Pairings: Clark/Bruce
Rating: PG
Summary:  Clark is having a bad day.
Word count:  1375
Continuity:  No idea
Notes: This is the first thing I've written in a looooong while so don't expect anything amazing. It also really isn't what I ment to write atall :/ Also no one has beta'ed this, Sorry about th typos

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Comments

[laramoon]

Nice! I like the way you describe things, you can almost feel everything. Totally giggled at the way you referred to the girl as "not Jenny". :D And there were a few lines that really had me snorting. hehehe. :D

I hope you were planning a sequel, because I'd love to find out where this is going. :) You've got a nice premise here, that's just begging for more story.

As a side note, I spotted a few very small typos here and there. If you're ever in need of someone to beta for you, I know someone who'd be willing to help. ;)

[genclay]

Thanks, I'm glad you found it amusing :)

I hope you were planning a sequel, because I'd love to find out where this is going. :) You've got a nice premise here, that's just begging for more story.

I'm not sure if I'll do a sequel. As I said this wasn't quite what I was planing. But I got tired and clark got spoked. I'll see. As for begging for more story. I will if you will. I saw the latest Kansas. Yay! hrmmm, must coment somwhere.

As a side note, I spotted a few very small typos here and there. If you're ever in need of someone to beta for you, I know someone who'd be willing to help. ;)

I may well take you up on that. I know my grammer and spelling are awful. It's one of the reasons I haven't written in so long. And I really haven't the heart to ask my other half to proof s/b slash.

[laramoon]

As for begging for more story. I will if you will.

LOL! then, let the games begin. *lol* (I begged in my comment for your sequel already. hehe! and I'll be editing the next chapter of Kansas this week - no joke.)

An seriously, any time you want/need a beta, I'm totally up for it. No kidding. Send me a PM and I'll give you my email addy. :) I love beta-reading and you write incredibly well, so it would be a pleasure to help out. :D

[genclay]

*tickles you PM inbox*

[genclay]

Thanks :)

I'm not quite sure where to take this. It really didn't go to plan. Maybe Bruces POV? Mind you I find the idea of trying to write a convincing Bruce scary.

[greeneyelove]

I do hope there is more! This was great.

[genclay]

Thanks, :)

I might Have to try now people are asking for it. This Feed back stuff is adictive and I've only had 6 comments. hehe

[meteor_seven]

This is a GORGEOUS piece of work :D
Inspires me...I'm gonna go and draw something XD

[genclay]

*Blushes*

Thanks. I was so nervous about posting this. I'm not sure why. All the people in this community seem nice and I've never seen any trolls.

Inspires me...I'm gonna go and draw something XD

Please let me see? This reminds me that I need to find a scaner to put up my sketches.

[jij]

Mmm! It's funny, I was just ready an author talking about a story she wrote in which the main character (a werewolf) smells the heroine before he really meets her and falls in love with that scent, and I was thinking that could be an interesting angle for Clark and Bruce meeting for the first time. And then I find this delicious fic on my flist! It's like magic, I tell you. :) That moment--How was the rest of the room not seeing this? --is a wonderful freeze-frame, I love the way time seems to slow down there. Yum.

[genclay]

Thanks for the comment, It means alot. In the nicest posible I blaim you and your stories for my current S/B obsesion :)

I wanted to try to get somthing alittle unusal in there as the 'Clark and bruce meet at a press reseption/party' isn't the most origanal. I feel Clark's sences are offden played down. If this Clark had already met Batman he would instantly known Bruce for the same man. If a hound could do it why not Clark? I've been thinking about it since I read a story where Bruce changes his cologne to Clark's (I can't remember who wrote it, So who ever you were, Credit goes to you)

[jij]

I've been thinking about it since I read a story where Bruce changes his cologne to Clark's (I can't remember who wrote it, So who ever you were, Credit goes to you)

That would be arch_schatten, yay! :) Scent is so overlooked as a sense and so hard to do well without it being a little odd, you know? It's the most animalistic sense we have and so sometimes it's hard to pull off well, but I liked how you did it a lot. :)