Mary Sue Got Harried, Chapter 10 of 14

[ozma914]

Title: Mary Sue Got Harried
Author: Ozma914

Summary: A group of watchers and slayers taking a creative writing class are assigned a simple lesson in author intrusion. But nothing’s ever simple when magic is -- literally -- in the air. (Note: This is set in my fictional universe in which magical spells have helped heal Dana’s mind and the

Comments

[brunettepet]

Kennedy having no idea who Dorothy Gale is is proof positive that she's a complete dolt. Her miscast spell and her ignorance are making me wonder what the heck Willow sees in her! Everybody looking at Suzy and Teagan's dereliction of duty as proof something even more sinister is afoot was also quite funny.

This absurd exchange made me laugh out loud: “What -- none of you are going to argue with me?”

Her father shrugged, and gestured toward the new girl. “Kara, I’d like you to meet Padme, who you may know as Queen Amidala of Naboo.”

[ozma914]

My guess is that it's the pierced tongue ... ;-) This is one case where Kennedy meant well, but considering what it's led to maybe she'll never act selflessly again!

It's a good thing Richard already had a well crafted sense of the absurd, or he'd have been pulling his hair out by now -- and he doesn't have that much extra hair to spare.