Comments | gen717: Signal Fire Chapter 10: Chloe and Oliver (NC-17)

gen717

Signal Fire Chapter 10: Chloe and Oliver (NC-17)

Feb 02, 2009 19:53

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svgurl February 3 2009, 02:39:09 UTC

An update! I was so excited when I saw this on my flist! What a fantastic chapter.

I hate Lex ... he's just a nutjob and I so want to see him taken down. You're doing a great job of making him evil. I think you do a better job of handling him than the show did, TBH.

Philip sucks and I'm so glad see Chloe taking him down and Team Chlollie getting the advantage! Or at least they're getting somewhere! :D

Your Chlollie is so awesome together. I love the dialogue.

“So much for your plan. I think it’s time you admit who’s the real brains behind this operation,” she quipped faintly.

Oliver smiled. “You know what they say. Behind every great man….”

“Is a woman rolling her eyes?”

LOL So perfect and in character.

I can't wait to see what will happen next!

Wonderful job!

gen717 February 3 2009, 03:33:26 UTC

Thanks so much! Work and real life stuff has kept me behind a bit with writing, and I ended up writing this chapter in one day, so I was hoping it wasn't too horrible! LOL I'm glad you liked it. :)

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gen717 February 4 2009, 11:23:08 UTC

Thanks! Work has been tiring and RL hectic once more, I didn't think I'd crank this chapter out. I'm glad you liked it. :)

anonymous February 3 2009, 04:47:15 UTC

Wonderful as always. It makes me happy when you update :)!
Chloe kicked ass in this one. I even feel sorry for Phillip.
Great job.

-Rubie

gen717 February 4 2009, 11:23:47 UTC

Thanks, Rubie! It makes me happy when you read! :D

sardonyx_78 February 3 2009, 11:30:15 UTC

So pleased to see an update!

I love this story and every chapter of it gets me more and more lost in the characters, as always with your writing it's excellent.

gen717 February 4 2009, 11:24:46 UTC

Thanks so much. Things have been crazy lately, and I'm just glad I finally got this chapter out there. So glad you are enjoying it!

cold_queen_5 February 3 2009, 13:44:51 UTC

WOOT WOOT! GO CHLOE. USE THAT FEMINITY LIKE A WEAPON. (Lord knows that Lois does it enough on the damn show and Chloe, despite her extreme fineness, has never been written that way!)

I hate to say it but Philip totally got what he deserved.

AND LEX IS EBIL. LIKE REALLY EBIL. SERIOUSLY EBIL.

Clearly, he's gone insane.

gen717 February 4 2009, 11:26:11 UTC

Yes! Girl needs to work it more. I like my villians evil with a cause/goal in mind. I really don't like the way the show has portrayed Tess, and even Lex at times. Lex should be a crazy bastard.