Comments | gen717: Signal Fire Chapter 7: Chloe and Oliver (NC-17)

gen717

Signal Fire Chapter 7: Chloe and Oliver (NC-17)

Jan 15, 2009 11:32

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laurelnola January 15 2009, 17:43:32 UTC

*covers eyes and scrolls down hastily*

Okay, I'm not looking yet- I just want you to know that I am waiting with baited breath for this new series to be complete so I can go into my usual squee-fest in one go! And also, I think you deserve an early SQUEEEEEE! just because you're starting a new one!
*claps wildly* Is it dorky to shout "yippee"? Well, too bad:

YIPPPEEEEEEEEEEEE!

gen717 January 16 2009, 02:17:52 UTC

Yay! Unfortunately, this story is turning out to be some of the darkest stuff I've written, and I'll need to get away from the angst soon and write a nice fluffy oneshot or something to balance my brain out. LOL

lilmoochie January 15 2009, 18:17:28 UTC

Who knew you could read with your eyes partially covered? Like that movie that you know is intense you don't really want to watch, but can't look away. Gen you've really outdone yourself with this. The drama and emotion are....wow. Even with the JL Oliver still believes he ordinary but they don't he is their leader...>Standing Ovation< Good job....

gen717 January 16 2009, 02:18:55 UTC

It's going to get worse, hun.. just letting you know. :(

cold_queen_5 January 15 2009, 18:22:34 UTC

Lex, you're turning quite evil. I lurve it.

I admit it, I miss him. He was such a good villain on the show, so twisty in the beginning. He's not even REALLY a villain (in the show), just a man who's path was clearly set for him by those around him. Also, Michael is a FANTASTIC actor, so it helps.

I wonder what the "big plan" is...tell me? TELL ME!

gen717 January 15 2009, 18:31:17 UTC

Hehe.. I tried to give little hints of what the plan was, but that will be fully revealed in the next chapter, which is nearly done btw, because I almost wrote the two chapters simultaneously. Think of what the perfect way would be to torture both Chloe and Oliver not only physically, but mentally and emotionally as well? It has to do with her ability... hmmmm. It's evol genius I tell you!

anonymous January 15 2009, 18:38:11 UTC

Fantastic as usual! I keep on refreshing this site to see if you've posted anything new. I love your writing, it is so real. Can't wait to see what evil plan Lex has. Woot!

-Rubie

gen717 January 16 2009, 02:19:34 UTC

Thank you, Rubie! Get on LJ! LOL

svgurl January 15 2009, 20:50:21 UTC

It seems Lex really has gone off the deep end. Him and Tess ... now that's a worrisome combination.

I really like the way you write the team ... they're just so much fun!

“What’s with him and Greek mythology?” AC asked.

“He should have been a classics professor,” Bart quipped

LOL The dialogue is still great. :D

But OLLIE! I'm worried for him now. Both he and Chloe are in Lex's grasp. That's not good at all.

I can't wait to see what will happen next. :D

Wonderful job!

gen717 January 16 2009, 02:21:02 UTC

Lex has become quite twisted in his time away. He's had lots more time to contemplate his evolness, at least in my version.

Poor Ollie is going to be in some trouble.

I love writing the team, and haven't had them in my stories lately, I've missed them. They'll be back again later. :)