Wow, this was quite the tense chapter. I love the action scenes with Ollie and I'm really curious what happened to him.
And Philip ... GRR ... he gets no points in my book. At least he's trying to keep Chloe safe. That's one good thing. And he's clearly underestimated Ollie, which will be good because I believe Ollie will show him up!
The ending! What a cliffhanger! I can't wait to see what Chloe thinks. :D
Philip gives me the creeps. I hope he gets what's coming to him before this is all said and done. Great chapter...I think this and the prequel are your best work yet. :D
Yeah... Philip is supposed to be ambiguously creepy, so that's good, but he really is just a pawn/soldier for hire doing Lex's dirty work. He really does have feelings for Chloe though. I'm leaving the real hard-core villany to Tess and Lex, coming up soon.
Philip and the Green Arrow/Oliver will meet again. Only next time they'll know who the other is.
WHOO WHOO!cold_queen_5January 10 2009, 23:33:48 UTC
Josh Duhamel, you sexy DASTARDLY BEAST! He still cares for Chloe and it WAS HIM FIGHTING OLIVER. ROFL @ Ollie getting his arse kicked. It amuses me.
Philip will totally get his comeuppance though. I NO WANTS HIM DEAD THOUGH! Just...out of the picture. Maybe remorseful? Maybe hooking up with Tess just so SHE'S out of the picture too?!
I don't think I'll kill Philip, but he's going to get a taste of his own medicine for sure. He really does care for Chloe, and maybe if circumstances were like.. WAAAAY different, he may have had a chance with her. And yup. It was him fighting the Green Arrow!
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And Philip ... GRR ... he gets no points in my book. At least he's trying to keep Chloe safe. That's one good thing. And he's clearly underestimated Ollie, which will be good because I believe Ollie will show him up!
The ending! What a cliffhanger! I can't wait to see what Chloe thinks. :D
Fantastic job!
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Philip and Oliver will see each other again. :)
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Philip and the Green Arrow/Oliver will meet again. Only next time they'll know who the other is.
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Philip will totally get his comeuppance though. I NO WANTS HIM DEAD THOUGH! Just...out of the picture. Maybe remorseful? Maybe hooking up with Tess just so SHE'S out of the picture too?!
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They will meet again of course!
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oh man poor chloe having to be where lex is and him now knowing what she can do .
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr about phillip . wow about how he looks but i do not like phillip at all.
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