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svgurl December 23 2008, 06:11:35 UTC
What a fantastic update! I had to mentally prepare myself for this chapter because I knew this would be where the plan took place and I was so nervous. But I'm addicted to this story so I had to read it.

It was amazing. I'm so sad for Chloe though. She thinks Ollie was straying! Stupid Adriana and Phil. They both suck.

I'm glad that the GA interrupted and didn't let Chloe get kidnapped. I'm sure Lex won't give up though. And I can't wait to see what will happen next.

Wonderful job!

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gen717 December 23 2008, 19:35:15 UTC
You're absolutely right. Lex won't give up, and neither will Phil. They are trying to separate Chlollie, and there's more. ;)

Thank you again for all of the support you've given me! It means a lot. :)

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angelbsb December 23 2008, 06:37:53 UTC
it was great that ollie stopped her from being taken . i hope they can talk out their differnces soon. oh man lex is going to be so mad i think phil will be dead soon since he failed . PPMS

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gen717 December 23 2008, 19:35:52 UTC
They are going to have a pretty intense conversation. Stay tuned! Phil is not done yet. ;)

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alexis374 December 23 2008, 07:21:59 UTC
ooh just what i needed in amongst all the pre-xmas build-up. awesome chapter! and silly luthor. it takes more than that to break up chlollie hehe

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gen717 December 23 2008, 19:36:29 UTC
It takes more than that, but they aren't finished. More soon!

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purple_moon123 December 23 2008, 07:32:01 UTC
Stupid Adriana and Phil!!!

It's good that GA was able to stop Lex's plan of kidnapping Chloe.I hope Chloe and Oliver work this out.

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gen717 December 23 2008, 19:37:00 UTC
GA foiled a kidnapping plot without knowing really. Lots of intrigue happening here. More to come. :)

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cold_queen_5 December 23 2008, 14:17:02 UTC
LOL. "Almost"...but not quite. COME ON, OLLIE. 'Fess up! If you tell the truth, she's more likely to forgive you. Lie about it...and...well...Chloe is gonna get her Kryptonian BFF to kick your ass.

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gen717 December 23 2008, 19:38:12 UTC
There's going to be a pretty intense conversation coming up. Oliver hasn't lied to her yet. He just hasn't divulged the complete truth.. LOL He will though.

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