Aww, I'm sorry RL has been so stressful lately. I know what that's like and you're not whining at all. It can definitely be a muse killer. And being sick sucks too. I hope you are feeling better and RL gets a bit less chaotic! As for your loyal fans, we're patient people because whatever you give us, whenever you give it us is always worth it. ;)
This chapter just proved that because it was fabulous! I love all the drama. I feel like I have my heart in my throat the entire time. Davis really scares me! I'm really frightened on Chloe's behalf. The Davis/Tess exchanges are sheer brilliance!
And Chloe and Ollie ... they're so cute! I feel sad that they just got together and have to deal with so much. The sex was very well written though ... and the emotions were done perfectly throughout this chapter.
“It’s Bart,” Oliver murmured, pressing a kiss to her forehead.
“How do you know?”
“I’m psychic.”
A short laugh burst from her lips. “A new super power?”
“Who else can call one minute and be here the next?”I love with the all the
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Yeah right? RL really does wacky things to the muse. Thanks so much for your patience and sticking with me. :) I love your comments! Hopefully the next chapter will be up sooner.
Re: O shiznit...gen717November 12 2008, 01:52:04 UTC
I love Davis too.. actually I think I really just love Sam Witwer, I think he's brought so much to the show this season, and I enjoy his Davis. But, Doomsday is a badass dude, and though I'm enjoying the Chloom dynamic and would rather see Chloom than Chimmy (hell, Chloe and Shelby are a better pairing than Chimmy!), I know that ultimately Chloom is Doomed. LOL So some part of me won't let full on Chloom really happen here.
Hopefully the next chapter won't take as long to write. :)
i liked the chapter... i am a huge davis fan since he got on the show... the fact that he is the only male character (besides jimmy, btu he doesn't count as male) that recognises that chloe is female made him very symapthic from the start... so reading him as an obsessed and partly evil character in your story is... weired... but to be honest, it does work very well, because i guess with the level of power that he has it is unavoidable that he turns evil at some point.... so, again very very VERY good chapter love it
I enjoy Davis on the show too, but yeah he is a villain, and some part of me just can't pair him completely with Chloe. As I've said before, I'd rather see Chloom than have Chimmy because Chimmy does absolutely nothing for me, but yeah. Dooms is a bad guy. Thanks so much for reading! That you too time to read and leave your thoughts means a lot to me. *hugs*
that sucks that work has been stressful! work officially sucks, and i think we can all relate to that. but one of the great things about you is you still always update - you never give up on a story! for which i am eternally grateful. there is nothing worse than falling in love with a story only to have it abandoned. in any event, this chapter was TOTALLY worth the wait. wowza. suspense-filled and awesome chlollie scene... faaaabulous. well done, and i hope things ease up for you at work! =)
I know exactly what you mean. I promised myself that if I ever started writing fanfic, I'd make a conscious effort to finish a story and not leave readers hanging. I know real life stuff gets in the way, effects the muse, the time we have for writing and thinking, but yeah I don't think it's fair to the readers, not only that, I just need to know that I can finish what I start.
Thanks so much for being patient and staying with me!
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This chapter just proved that because it was fabulous! I love all the drama. I feel like I have my heart in my throat the entire time. Davis really scares me! I'm really frightened on Chloe's behalf. The Davis/Tess exchanges are sheer brilliance!
And Chloe and Ollie ... they're so cute! I feel sad that they just got together and have to deal with so much. The sex was very well written though ... and the emotions were done perfectly throughout this chapter.
“It’s Bart,” Oliver murmured, pressing a kiss to her forehead.
“How do you know?”
“I’m psychic.”
A short laugh burst from her lips. “A new super power?”
“Who else can call one minute and be here the next?”I love with the all the ( ... )
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Hopefully the next chapter won't take as long to write. :)
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i am a huge davis fan since he got on the show...
the fact that he is the only male character (besides jimmy, btu he doesn't count as male) that recognises that chloe is female made him very symapthic from the start...
so reading him as an obsessed and partly evil character in your story is... weired... but to be honest, it does work very well, because i guess with the level of power that he has it is unavoidable that he turns evil at some point....
so, again very very VERY good chapter
love it
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Thanks so much for being patient and staying with me!
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