I am loving this story and anxiously await each chapter.
I thought this one was very well done; a great build-up of everything, the entire plot. I can't help but think what Tess is planning and what is going to happen with Chloe and Clark, not to mention Oliver.
Thanks so much! I hope you don't mind but I took a peak at your journal and saw that you are a Chlollie lover too. If you do ever post any fics I'd LOVE to read them. I can never get enough of these two. It's really crazy because they are not even a couple on the show, but I agree they are fast becoming my OTP.
Thanks again, it means a lot that you took time to read and leave your thoughts! :)
Great update! I really love Ollie and Chloe's date, how they could just be casual with each other.
When Chloe realized she was in love with Oliver, my heart melted. That was just so adorable! Aww ... those two definitely deserve a happy ending.
The conversation with Chloe, Oliver and Clark was very interesting. I can't wait to see how Ollie gets that crystal and I think it's awesome that Chloe insists on coming with him.
Tess and Davis's conversation was good too. That last line has me intrigued!
Your characters continue to be very well written and I'm enjoying the play of emotions.
I'm a sucker for happy endings, and I agree, Chlollie deserves theirs. Thanks so much for sticking with me on this story. As nervous as I was about writing Tess and Dooms, not knowing much about them when I started, I appreciate the words of confidence. *hugs*
I have a feeling the show is going this way and that's the whole point of Davis's attraction to Chloe because of Brainiac: The desire to mate based on creating a new vessel for Zod. Sounds wacked out as hell, but that's my spec for the show, and it's Sci-Fi, so wacked out is okay. LOL Plus at least here, my Chloe is a little smarter here in that she's called off the Chimmy wedding, fallen in love with Oliver Queen, and knows just how ridiculous it is to be a Zod-vessel baby mama! Also there are no ill-side effects to her having super-human intelligence here, unless you consider an intergalactic monster wanting you to have his babies. LOL
This is a fantastic story! Every chapter is loaded with great dialogue. I love that she was able to handle both heroes with her sheer determination. I can't wait to see what happens next, bring it on!!! :)
So glad you liked it, I was a little nervous thinking I was going overboard with the story that made Davis's attraction to her be about Brainiac, basically the desire to mate based on creating a vessel for Zod, but that's what the show is seems to be doing, and it's Sci-Fi, so wacked out story is okay. LOL
Your a true talent Gen I love reading all your stories..Have you ever thought to do a web page..I mean you have GREAT HOT STORIES and GREAT HOT GRAPHICS..you would do well to have a web page..I believe it would be the first of its kind a Chloe/Oliver fan fic page..Were you and any others that write about this couple could put up stories
Thank you! You know? I've thought of that, but I'm not sure how to do it. Do you mean sort of like one of those free message boards? (I think there is a Chlollie message board somewhere but it's mostly dead, maybe because people simply don't know about it.) As far as a web page, I'll have to look into it, and see if there was a way to set it up so others could post their stories. It would be cool, I just don't know if I'm web-savvy enough to do one. LOL
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I thought this one was very well done; a great build-up of everything, the entire plot. I can't help but think what Tess is planning and what is going to happen with Chloe and Clark, not to mention Oliver.
Keep at it :)
Julie
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Thanks again, it means a lot that you took time to read and leave your thoughts! :)
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Here's what it looked like last month (several parts):
http://www.kryptonsite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=94861
Then I had to put the next part on the adult forum:
http://www.kryptonsite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=94973
It's up to 60+ pages now and I'm kind of stuck at the moment but... I'm still working on it :)
And you're most welcome :)
Julie
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When Chloe realized she was in love with Oliver, my heart melted. That was just so adorable! Aww ... those two definitely deserve a happy ending.
The conversation with Chloe, Oliver and Clark was very interesting. I can't wait to see how Ollie gets that crystal and I think it's awesome that Chloe insists on coming with him.
Tess and Davis's conversation was good too. That last line has me intrigued!
Your characters continue to be very well written and I'm enjoying the play of emotions.
Wonderful job!
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