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svgurl September 30 2008, 05:10:30 UTC
CHLOLLIE KISSED!!! YAAAAYYYYY!!!

Okay, I'm done. Now for the rational part of the review. ;D Though I'm still internally squeeing, just so you know.

I love the deal between Chloe and Tess, how firm Chloe was on not touching Green Arrow. That was awesome. :D

The Chlo-Lo was fabulous. I like Lois giving her her blessing.

“And you’re totally okay with this?”

“At first, no. I wasn’t. I admit the whole thing is pretty weird. But I’ve thought about it a lot. And I just think you’re better suited to him than Jimmy. Oliver and I have made our peace with things, and yeah, I’m okay with it. Besides, he knows what I’ll do to him if he hurts my cousin.”

“You’ve talked to him?”

“Maybe.”

Aww, Lois! Being all protective ... that warms my heart. You write her really well!

The Chlollie kiss! That was extremely hot! And just like I thought, it was so worth the wait!

Wonderful job!

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gen717 September 30 2008, 14:25:47 UTC
Chloe didn't stand a chance, did she? Hehe. I'm happy that it came out as hot as I wanted it to! :)

I kind of miss the more assertive Chloe, and I hope she hasn't completely disappeared on the show. We see glimpses, but I think even the show forgets that she nearly took down the Luthors, which was no easy feat.

I enjoy writing Lois, she's a lot of fun to write and I'm glad you think I'm doing a good job with her. I really do think she'd be supportive in the end of any Chlollie. She does care about both of them.

Thanks so much for your wonderful comments, I love reading your thoughts!

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angelbsb September 30 2008, 07:37:34 UTC
yes they kissed finally lol. loved how lois and clark where trying to get them toghther. i feel like chloe should watch her back around tess . PPMS

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chloequeen2009 September 30 2008, 10:51:29 UTC
This story just gets better and better with each chapter..the long awaited kiss can't wait till their first date..and with the thought of her now helping Tess to find Lex..What will Lex do when he comes back..

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gen717 September 30 2008, 16:18:09 UTC
Thanks so much! Woohoo, they kissed! More soon. :)

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gen717 September 30 2008, 14:27:16 UTC
Chloe knows Tess will not be upfront with her. She doesn't trust Tess at all, she'll watch her back, no worries. :)

Yay! They kissed! :D

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lilmoochie September 30 2008, 14:07:39 UTC
Oh yeah,the kiss was worth the wait :" !!!! Chloe is also a force to be reckoned with I loved the dialogue between her and Tess, Wowser, great Chapter.

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gen717 September 30 2008, 14:29:52 UTC
Oliver didn't say a word, and Chloe didn't stand a chance against him. :D Well, I wouldn't either, but you know. LOL

I really miss assertive, kick ass Chloe on the show the way she used to be. I hope she hasn't disappeared completely.

Thanks so much!

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all_you_wanted September 30 2008, 14:46:36 UTC
Wow. That was a HOT kiss. :D

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gen717 September 30 2008, 16:16:35 UTC
Hehe, thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Poor Chloe, where Oliver is concerned, resistance is futile. :D

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gen717 October 1 2008, 03:42:23 UTC
Thanks so much! More soon. :)

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