Anything But Ordinary:Chloe/Oliver (NC-17) Chapter 8

[gen717]

Comments

[gen717]

Hehe. I'm so evol. You know I'll deliver when we get to the NC-17 stuff. :D You know me, I must have Chlollie smut in my stories. ;)

Ollie's totally falling in love. *sigh* :)

[angelbsb]

wow loved this . i feel sad for ollie finding out his parents where killled by lionel .loved how chloe was there for him. davis is jelous of clark and ollie around chloe. oh boy .PPMS

[gen717]

Thanks so much! I'm so glad you are enjoying this. :)

[svgurl]

I'm loving this story so much. You're just a fantastic author! Everything is so RIGHT!

I felt so bad for Ollie when he found out that his parents were murdered. Poor guy ... you really do a great job in writing the emotions.

I love how Chloe comforted him. The Chlollie relationship is progressing quite nicely. The UST was so high and I really thought they were going to kiss. But I guess it's better they wait ... I know when they do, the wait would have been worth it.

The Clark-Oliver conversation was really sweet. Clark was overprotective but he was sympathetic toward Ollie too. Can I tell you how much I love you for not having a Clark-Chloe-Oliver triangle? I really like fics where there is Chlollie and Clark's friends with both of them. :D

The scene with Davis was intense! How he was jealous of Clark and Ollie!

Fantastic work!

[gen717]

So glad that you are enjoying this! I really wanted to give Chlollie some more emotional depth, and more UST before the big moment, which may actually come when either of them least expects it.

Clark was being the voice of reason, and that's usually his role so I think that worked pretty well, even if Oliver already knows.

More to come soon! Thanks so much for reading and leaving your thoughts, it means a lot! :)

[lilmoochie]

You know that little voice inside of you is great for the really BIG things and lots of little things inbetween but I protest the "Kissing Oliver would be all kinds of wrong." That little voice needs to shhhhhhhhhh!!! LOL, Great Chapter as always this story is very addictive.

[gen717]

She would have kissed him back if Clark had not entered, but I think she'd have regretted it, and then brushed it off later. I need her to be more emotionally invested in Oliver for the kiss to stick (or mean more), if that makes any sense.. lol The kiss would have meant more to him than to her right now, and I'd like them to be on the same or similar page. No worries though, kissage coming soon, and of course we've not even gotten to the NC-17 stuff yet. Hehe. ;)

[gen717]

LOL, yes Clark has awful timing! No worries though.. kissage coming soon. :)