FanFiction: Rain

[gemmiesky]

Title: Rain
Pairing: Ohno Satoshi/Aiba Masaki
Genre: Smut
Rating: R
Length: One Shot (w/c: 1698)
Summary: Rain isn't the only thing that can make you wet...
Disclaimner: The usual I don't own them, only the plot bunny that bred so well....

A/N: I'm hopelessly chicken when it comes to sharing these things with the world.. So a big thank you to jessibear_kun  and shisaigas for

Comments

[jessibear_kun]

*steals* >D I'll be back to comment appropriately after re-reading.

[jessibear_kun]

This is, what? The sixth time reading it form start to finish? And yet, I'm still not tired of it. You know why? Because 1) it's Ohno and Aiba, 2) it's really hot, and 3) you wrote it wonderfully. And even included the word "cock."

I think you changed that line perfectly; the confusing one we were talking about. Also, I still love the "awkwardly" used at the end. Kanpeki da~ That summary is still killing me a little bit. . . XD

Waiting for more with bated breathe. Stalker!Jess is stalking, ne.

[gemmiesky]

you like it :D thanks for being my beta <3

I DID use the word cock XD so proud of me! lol and thank you and thank you :D

Oh good I'm so glad.. I was getting confused trying to unconfuse me ROFL not even kidding.. I kept going wait what?? D: Thank you again.. I imagine he would have felt a bit awkward after all :D Still like that summary do you? >D

I'll try another I'm sure.. :) so you just keep stalking! :D

[jessibear_kun]

No problem. Though, beta!Jess (seriously, am I gonna start talking in third-person?) found a tiny little mistake. Second paragraph: "...settled the room arrangements the only they way knew how," way and they should be switched.

Hahaha, only you, Jamie. Only you. And, yep. Best summary I've read in a long time.

[gemmiesky]

Do you need another tag? YES/YES? :D lol

Why didn't Beta!Jess find that when she read it before I posted? XD Thanks btw :D I'll go fix that :D

Only me eh? :D And thanks.. I actually sort of giggled aloud when I was typing it >D

[jessibear_kun]

What is my answer? Sure/Why not.

Beta!Jess didn't know about it and, upon checking her version of the story, sees that it was correct prior to posting. Beta!Jess says she's sorry anyway. Beta!Jess is telling Normal!Jess to stop talking in alternate-egos.

Only you! <3

beta!jess and the world of round!abouts... stay tuned!

[gemmiesky]

LOL just might do that too before you wake up and realize whats happening here :D

*pets*

<3 hearts mean its a good thing ne? :D

Sleepy!Jess didn't sleep, ne.

[jessibear_kun]

Nope, I'm pretty coherent, given the time. In fact, I may still be awake when you get up to do it. Therefore my plan to put an end to third-person speech and alter-egos will take affect and perish the insanity to the depths of boredom. Did I say coherent? I meant crazy.

Hearts means it's a very good thing.

Sleepy!Jamie has an annoying cat...

[gemmiesky]

I envy your stamina lol

Coherent, Crazy.. fine line don't you think? XD

I love hearts ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[gemmiesky]

yes.. five times ROFL