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The Narrative Strain, Chapter 13b

Jul 11, 2010 11:38

TITLE: History Rewritten
RATING: T
GENRE: Horror/Tragedy
DESCRIPTION: What was truth, and what was fiction?
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Screw you, LJ formatting. >=(

( Click for crazy, part two... )

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anonymous July 13 2010, 11:20:29 UTC

I have been following this story from the beginning & have become quite attached to your version of these characters ( ... )

vampire_cookies July 13 2010, 14:46:55 UTC

*taps chin thoughtfully*

You're definitely getting ahead of me, o' great anonymous one. I won't say that your theory is 100% correct, but I'm more than happy to tell you that you're definitely on the right path. =)

I too believe in happy endings, but happiness is very subjective. Was that a vague enough answer for you? Hee hee. I am forced to get more and more vague with you kids.

anonymous July 13 2010, 17:22:25 UTC

I think your story is remarkable. It's clever, amusing, beautifully written & the dialogue is just....WOW.

That being said I almost want to stop reading it for fear of an unpleasant (to me anyway) ending. My heart has begun to shatter after this last chapter.

If your story was a book or something I could read quickly I wouldn't care as much- but I've been on this ride with you for almost a year & REALLY don't want a tragic ending.

vampire_cookies July 13 2010, 17:57:12 UTC

Aw, dood. You're killing me here! I'm already under a ton of pressure to wrap this neatly up, and then you go and throw your heart at me, begging me not to break it. *sigh*

You are so incredibly sweet. Believe me when I tell you that I'm going to try and give my readers a perfect ending to this story. It might not be the ending you'd hoped for, but that's what makes it exciting-- right?

I can't believe it's been almost a year since I've started this pile of crazy. That is quite a ride indeed. I'm amazed so many of you are still with me! But if you've managed to stick it out thus far, do you think you'd be willing to hang in there just a little bit longer?

*adopts most pleading expression*

anonymous July 13 2010, 19:57:22 UTC

"There…you look wonderful! And I know the journey will be far more pleasant than you think."

"Maybe," said Elphaba with a wry sort of smile. "But it won't be the same without you."

*is sobbing*

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