Three mornings and one night that tried to change the ending

[jeminisoul]

Title: Three mornings and one night that tried to change the ending
Fandom: Wicked - bookverse
Pairing: Gelphie
Rating: The first is G, the second R and the last NC-17.
Summary: This is a bit of an odd little fic, it is comprised of three ficlets. It is meant to be a look at three of the most representative mornings in our girl's lives and how they

Comments

[sumthnwicked]

Good God, child, you break my heart when you write them like this.

I'm thinking I need to concede the duel out of hand. You are amazing, my friend :)

♥

[jeminisoul]

*Gets a badge, writes 'heartbreak' on it. Wears it* Haha! That is a very bitter sweet badge...

Thanks for the love and you're conceding? So V's love is mine bwhahaha.

Woh, I really cannot write coherently on a Saturday morning before yoga XD Thanks again for everything, I just got lucky with this fic XD

[broadwaybaby_xx]

I'm posting this here too because I love it so much.

Sweet. Lurline. I know I will completely fail at what I want to say here but I will certainly try. I love this so much. Every part of it was perfect. Every. Last. Word. The angst breaks my heart but I totally love it because I am an angst whore.

I love the way you wrote it too. It's like Gregory Maguire wrote this himself. The Elphaba and Glinda you wrote were so.. it. There's no words to describe how perfect you have them. I can imagine every scene and every detail perfectly.

In short, you are amazing, m'dear. This is one of my favorite (if not my favorite) fics I've ever read. Thank you so much for writing it. <3
Much love,
V.

[jeminisoul]

I'm only going to reply here because I am lazy. :P Lol

Thanks for loving the angst, I was worried that I would lose on that account. Also I write them like GM? That is the best compliment that I could ask for, thanks so much.

OMGWOWWTFBBQ. Thank you. So much.

Also, the duel is mine. :D

[colorofspring]

Gah. My heart is broken. Beautifully broken. I love reading bookverse Gelphie, it's so...intense. And I imagine it is easier writing bookverse from Glinda's POV rather than Elphaba's because Elphaba is so mysterious and doesn't give anything away. You really got them down, I think.

And I love that you gave Elphaba some gray hairs. It made me smile.

[jeminisoul]

Thanks so much!

I find that bookverse gelphie is often tragic due to the ending of the book, there are happy moments but we all know how the story will end. I suppose Glinda's head has more space for you to get into XD

You noticed! YAY! I hoped someone would. It was almost a mini test, and you passed :D

[colorofspring]

Baha! Poor Glinda and her head space. At least she loves Elphie. It may not be clear to her but it's clear to us.

I passed? Yes! Did I win anything?

[jeminisoul]

And that's all that matters...

Erm. Approval? Love? Imaginary cookies?

[vjb2006]

Honestly not sure about part one. Something aqbout their beds being pushed together doesn't work for me in a dorm setting where they're still a secret. Parts two and three however were heartbreaking.

[jeminisoul]

I wasn't sure about it either, I just wanted the excuse of them being together. I suppose I could have used single bed but double seemed more fitting in order for me to mimic it in the third one.

Thanks so much for all the crit and the comments :D

[bsofthewest]

Merciful Oz, you've got me crying. I'll comment later.........

[jeminisoul]

Ooooh I'm sorry *Hands you tissues and hugs*. Don't be sad - the girls are fine! Really. Fine. XD

I'm glad it was that powerful :) Thanks for the comment.