Galindafication part 3

Mar 21, 2008 16:02

 Notes in the Margins series Part 3
Title: Galindafication part 3/4
Rating: PG
Subject: musical verse
Disclaimer: I don't own them or we would all be living in a different world
Notes: This is a continuation from my last story Beautiful which can be found by following the link.  This begins a new chapter and falls in the play between the night after ( Read more... )

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housetheman March 21 2008, 23:30:06 UTC
Logic told her it was best this way, but her heart and her body were crying out in youthful disappointment and frustration.

So well written... brilliant. Let's see how/if this all works out in the end.

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laylat March 21 2008, 23:43:53 UTC
thank you so much. and it will all work out, but the end is a ways away yet.

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ariestess March 22 2008, 00:23:06 UTC
Oh, very nicely done! What a great explanation of their feelings and their first kiss...

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laylat March 22 2008, 00:34:15 UTC
i'm glad you said that, i was a bit afraid that this would come off as somewhat of a tease but one must obey the muses

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ariestess March 22 2008, 03:57:28 UTC
No, it was good!

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asylumfugitive March 22 2008, 01:01:36 UTC
OOOoooOOOoooOOOOOOooooh!
indeed a good verse.

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laylat March 22 2008, 05:27:03 UTC
why thank you, your praise is much appreciated

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colorofspring March 22 2008, 01:18:17 UTC
Even this seemingly innocent touch made Galinda feel many not so innocent things.

Oh confused and frustrated feelings of angst!

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laylat March 22 2008, 05:28:34 UTC
yup, these two have a ways to go yet before they figure it all out but the ride should be a good one

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so_confusifying March 22 2008, 16:08:44 UTC
Whoa. I can like feel the chemistry between them!

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laylat March 22 2008, 22:34:08 UTC
thanks! i'm glad to hear i've been successful :D

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