[drabbles] Giving Debts: Gaara character-piece (implied NaruGaa)

Jan 24, 2006 09:00

Giving Debts
NarutoGaara character-piece, NaruGaa ( Read more... )

drabble, gaara, narugaa, naruto

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maiahaha January 24 2006, 17:35:15 UTC
The truth is, he never feels safe enough to give pieces of himself away, the way Temari, Kankuro, and Naruto do. He feels too much in danger of losing himself, of losing the demon, of losing them to take the chance.

I really loved this. and it's going in my memories :D

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gelfling8604 January 24 2006, 17:39:40 UTC
Yaay! Memories for me!
This is a gentler, quieter Gaara than I'm really used to doing, but it's a nice different perspective. More human. Normally I like the monstrous homicidal machine, but this was nice too. Quiet.

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proud_snapist January 24 2006, 19:34:58 UTC
Wow. Incredible. I liked the progression and how Gaara doesn't really grow up because he doesn't have the privilege to go through the growing part. Great drabbles.

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gelfling8604 January 24 2006, 21:08:04 UTC
Yeah--I've always liked the idea that Gaara never actually matures, not emotionally anyway, even though his mind gets more decisive and he stays just as powerful as ever.

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pyroinsomnia January 24 2006, 21:12:13 UTC
My GOD, this is amazing... going into my memories.

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gelfling8604 January 24 2006, 21:15:12 UTC
Yee! Memories memories! Yummy.
I really liked how the pacing came out in this one; felt relaxing.

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pyroinsomnia January 25 2006, 01:40:20 UTC
Yeah, I agree.

Everything about this just seemed so... I don't know, just Gaara to me. XD I can't explain things well. ^^;

Do you mind if I friend you?

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gelfling8604 January 25 2006, 16:53:25 UTC
Yay! I did Gaara accurately! Hurrah! And sure--please! Friend away; all my information is on my Profile, and if you're looking for more Gaara fic (and I've got a lot of Gaara fic--love this boy) it's all in my Memories. Hope that helps!

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maldoror_gw January 25 2006, 00:24:17 UTC
This here's my favorite bit:
Neither Kankuro nor Temari have figured it out: he hasn’t changed. He’s still a monster, still the creature he was when he went on killing rampages. He can still massacre hundreds without qualms, without mercy, the only difference is he doesn’t have the motive anymore, the inclination.

He’s no more human now than he was before; he’s simply more thoughtful.

It outlines the subtlety of the change Gaara went through when Naruto defeated him. Gaara didn't suddenly become englightened, get a heart, discover God, move to skimmed milk and lived happily ever after. He didn't fundamentally change; he just changed the direction in which he was going. There's been knock-on effects on his character, but he's still recognizably Gaara.

Lovely drabble; simple and pared down on the outside, thought-provoking on the inside (with tastes of crunchy caramel to boot). Thanks for the treat ^__^

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gelfling8604 January 25 2006, 16:54:08 UTC
get a heart, discover God, move to skimmed milk
*dies laughing*
Aw...I think it was the skimmed milk that did it. It'll do that to you. But I think it's interesting how he didn't fundamentally change, just changed a little, then changed in another little yet significant way, and is just feeling his way around. It's more interesting than the skimmed milk version.
I'm trying to work on being less verbose, so pared down is GOOD. I talk too much, I notice ^_^

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forgottenlover January 25 2006, 01:33:13 UTC
!!! Gaara ::stunned to realize she has no Gaara icons::

I really like how you convey him though, it's so simple, seemingly obvious, and ot.

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gelfling8604 January 25 2006, 15:09:39 UTC
*gasp*
No Gaara icons at all? Seriously?
Although, he tends to be a pretty underrated character--he does freak a lot of people out. And a lot of his sexier moments are completely insane, with pounding temples and drool and...man, I do love this boy. He's so COOL.

OTNESSS! OMG YAY!

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forgottenlover January 25 2006, 22:17:59 UTC
not at all ::bemoans:: And he's my other favortive chara next to Kiba too

::saw the exams part of the series with the interesting awesome grin::

YAY

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gelfling8604 January 27 2006, 19:49:49 UTC
You saw the part where he takes Lee apart, right? He's so...fucked up in the head, I swear. I like him better when he's fucked up and bloody then when he's quieter and more "Maybe I should think about this before killing them or walking out", but he's still pretty cool, either way.

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