2) What do you mean you can't do kink? This was kinky as HELL.
3) You're so not late. And right now this is like a Christmas present, especially with the themes, and omfg, what a present it is.
4) ajdkfhhk, did I mention?
5) I caught the American Gods reference and it made me squee, and then I wondered about the omfgSCARY proto-Santa Claus story that Envy tells after, and the fact that you made it up makes it even better.
6) I always love the way your Envy can't seem to escape from his contexts, from the comparisons with the others and from the frustration of making do with things that aren't right.
7) The porny bits were, and I mean this in the best possible way, sick. Actually, most of it was, because Envy is just like that, and I am SO GLAD that you took this challenge, because you made it deeply broken and impressionistic and filled with everything that makes Envy as fucked up as he is.
1. Hahahaaaa! Whee! 2. I can't do kink. I can do weird and disturbing though. It doesn't always work out well, but sometimes it carries it's weight. 3. Nack. It's later than I wanted it to be, and I've been properly marinated in Christmas good cheer enough to want odd not-sense. Or just plain disturbing wrongness. Neil Gaiman is writing god--him and Pratchett and somehow Tim Burton. If you put them all in the same room, the world will end. I am sure of this. But it'd totally end in a good way, so that's all right :D
Envy's all-around messed up; it's nice and wonderful to fall back on, because there's almost nothing he won't do. So messed up. So very horrible
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wow! That was so good! ^^ I really like how you made this pairing work...as well as your portrayal of Wrath's feelings for Sloth! ;) You did great with the kink. Oh, and btw, yay for the Golden Girls love! <3
Hee! Golden Girls! I love how messed up Wrath and Sloth are, as a relationship, so this just played and played with that. And of course Envy is all kinds of wrong, so that was yum-fun.
::laughs quietly:: Yes, well, I can understand that, I have many fics that are stuck in the 'tired' phase, which is incredibly annoying... kudos for wading past it!!
Me too--so many. There's the Heiderich/Ed 30 pg fic, the library Elricest, the Envy/Ed fic that I thought through and only half-wrote, and it's just...ARGH. So painful--so hard. Deadlines are good for getting past it though.
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2) What do you mean you can't do kink? This was kinky as HELL.
3) You're so not late. And right now this is like a Christmas present, especially with the themes, and omfg, what a present it is.
4) ajdkfhhk, did I mention?
5) I caught the American Gods reference and it made me squee, and then I wondered about the omfgSCARY proto-Santa Claus story that Envy tells after, and the fact that you made it up makes it even better.
6) I always love the way your Envy can't seem to escape from his contexts, from the comparisons with the others and from the frustration of making do with things that aren't right.
7) The porny bits were, and I mean this in the best possible way, sick. Actually, most of it was, because Envy is just like that, and I am SO GLAD that you took this challenge, because you made it deeply broken and impressionistic and filled with everything that makes Envy as fucked up as he is.
8) djfkhs.
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2. I can't do kink. I can do weird and disturbing though. It doesn't always work out well, but sometimes it carries it's weight.
3. Nack. It's later than I wanted it to be, and I've been properly marinated in Christmas good cheer enough to want odd not-sense. Or just plain disturbing wrongness.
Neil Gaiman is writing god--him and Pratchett and somehow Tim Burton. If you put them all in the same room, the world will end. I am sure of this. But it'd totally end in a good way, so that's all right :D
Envy's all-around messed up; it's nice and wonderful to fall back on, because there's almost nothing he won't do. So messed up. So very horrible ( ... )
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I love how messed up Wrath and Sloth are, as a relationship, so this just played and played with that. And of course Envy is all kinds of wrong, so that was yum-fun.
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Merry Christmas!
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