FanFic100: #042 Triangle

[gelbes_gilatier]

“Treffpunkt für den Abmarsch ist in 15 Minuten am Abgeordneteneingang.” The group of high ranking Luftwaffe, Heer and Marine officers in front of him nods and starts breaking up in smaller groups. One by one they all seek refuge from the biting cold in the enormous expense of the dome atop the Reichstag. He, however, stays outside. He’s seen the

Comments

[asugar]

Honeymoon and married Lorne and Cadman! Too adorable. I love it so much. They are simply darling here, especially from the wistful and jealous outsider's perspective. This series has made me really want to see all the places you've mentioned in these three stories since you evoked them so emotionally and intriguingly. The swing in tone from hopeless to melancholy to finally hopeful here is just wonderful. Great work.

[gelbes_gilatier]

The best thing about this story was the outsider's perspective. I did find it a bit challenging, because I wanted to give the outsider a personality, not ONLY use him as a vessel for observation, but didn't want to waste too MUCH time with characterization. Actually... Dühring did get a lot from me in the end.