Comments | gelbes_gilatier: Fic: Protect and Survive I: Might Just Save Your Life (6/8)

gelbes_gilatier

Fic: Protect and Survive I: Might Just Save Your Life (6/8)

Oct 19, 2010 20:11

“Yes, sir.” With that he finally sets off to face Keller’s usual scrutiny and disapproval of male military behavior.

~*~

TBC in Chapter Seven.

fannish stuff, stargate: protect and survive

Comments 2

anuna_81 October 19 2010, 19:25:51 UTC

Oh it's definitely not the cheeriest fic around, but it's such GOOD one. And that cheers me up. Poor Lorne!

There's one thing you address so well that usually slips my mind - they're soldiers, Sheppard is superior, Lorne feels all sorts of unpleasant things in this situation because of his and Laura's respectable positions in Atlantis. John may be a guy who doesn't stick to all the rules in the book, but he still has the rank and his orders must be obeyed. Funny how much John my fics include and I never really touch that issue. You gave me something to think about here.

I can't wait for more! And I hope Laura will be alright! *hugs you*

gelbes_gilatier October 19 2010, 20:12:36 UTC

Oh it's definitely not the cheeriest fic around, but it's such GOOD one. And that cheers me up. Poor Lorne!

Lorne is grumbling something like "Gee, at least my and Laura's misfortune is useful for something," I believe ;)

Funny how much John my fics include and I never really touch that issue.

I think that's probably due to the fact that on the show John rarely came across as a soldier. He was always someone with great conviction and dedication to his people, with outstanding combat performance and basically everything that made a good soldier... without actually behaving like one ( ... )