Somewhere I lost control of this one

[gekkoryu]

prompt: For convenient reasons, Loki is captured and forced into therapy. The therapist suggests Loki try to express his emotions through a less destructive medium, like poetry. Which rapidly deteriorates into Flyting.

So, at first I thought, hey, this could be really funny, but then I started writing and realized that Loki was just going to be

Comments

[anonymous]

This is absolutely lovely. I love the erratic rhyme scheme.

(Whet should really be wet in that last stanza, though.)

Word Play!

[gekkoryu]

I think wet and whet could both be argued.

It just depends on if you take the line to be literal (in which case, yes it should be wet) or figurative as Loki is using his ability to speak as a weapon (he's essentially telling the therapist to sharpen his own, so whet).

I appreciate the feedback though, thanks!

[poweroffunk]

OMG they got served XD