Fifty Shades Darker--Chapter Twenty (Part I) [SPORKERS: KET MAKURA, HARRY DRESDEN and THOMAS RAITH]

Feb 18, 2014 02:40

Fifty Shades Darker--Chapter Twenty (Part I)

In which Ana and Grey have a long, long, long sex scene in a freezing cold shower, Ket asks Harry to help her break a spell Loki put on her, Thomas is convinced that Christian Grey is a vampire that feeds on lust, emotions and souls--literally--and Ana refers to Christian "sucking as he goes," which could not be more accurate.

#repetition repetition #we have read this scene before #e.l.j. has cut and pasted #once again--it is a bore

#grey and ana both orgasm? #gasp amazing i may swoon #screwing that is plot-related? #might as well ask for the moon

#the book's plot? against the readers #fsd is now our foe #just one thing keeps us still going #two point five chapters to go

fifty shades, fifty shades darker, bad sex scenes, bad writing, sex, sex scenes

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