Fifty Shades Darker--Chapter Eighteen (Part II) [SPORKERS: GEHAYI, KET MAKURA and QUICKSILVERMAD]

Jan 28, 2014 01:22

Fifty Shades Darker--Chapter Eighteen (Part II)

In which Ket and Loki banter and get drunk, Ana Steele thinks that fucking in a parked car is dark and edgy, Grey is angered when Ana closes her eyes during sex, Ana finds erotic photos that exist for an extremely scummy reason, Grey pouts because Ana won't give him a birthday surprise before his birthday, and the chapter ends at a point that Ket, the Trickster God and I would consider a very happy ending...if there weren't four chapters still to go.

#all they do is fuck argue email and eat #they don't even know each other #they just like fucking each other #nothing else happens #nothing at all #if we wanted to read porn #there's better fanfic out there than this #and it features characters who have personalities #and some of it even has actual plot

fifty shades, fifty shades darker, fake cliffhanger, filler chapter, bad sex scenes, bad writing

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