Fifty Shades Darker--Chapter Thirteen [SPORKERS--GEHAYI and KET MAKURA]

Nov 12, 2013 01:05

Fifty Shades Darker--Chapter 13

In which the Psycho Ex-Girlfriend returns to the story, armed and supposedly dangerous; Ana, jealous of the mentally unstable woman who wants to kill herself, wangsts pointlessly for most of the chapter; Grey and ELJ both demonstrate, in words and actions, that they have no idea what being a submissive in BDSM involves, aside from kneeling on occasion; Grey's chief bodyguard takes absolutely no action when his boss is allegedly in peril; and Ket and I are overwhelmed by the stench of Dead Herrings in the morning.

#ket and i have put up with ana and grey's do-nothingness for a book and a half #and they need to DIE #before we expire from boredom # this book is nothing but filler on a Mobius strip #it loops around and repeats itself forever

#we cared about leila #even if what she did was mostly offscreen #because she was the only character who did stuff #other than fuck, eat and whine

fifty shades, plotholes, fifty shades darker, do not want, bad writing

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