Fifty Shades Darker--Chapter Six (Part I) [SPORKERS--GEHAYI and KET MAKURA]

Aug 20, 2013 00:31

Fifty Shades Darker--Chapter Six (Part I)

In which Ana deludes herself into thinking that having sex means that the relationship is perfectly okay; a white male adult refers to a non-white male adult as a "boy"; Ana is shocked by the idea of sex in the afternoon; Grey's supposed phobia about being touched becomes ever more inconsistent; Grey admits to Ana that he began this relationship with her expecting to be driven insane by jealousy; Ana admits IN THE TEXT that she doesn't know how long the relationship can continue without Grey beating her for a rule she didn't know she broke; there is much talk of underwear, dresses and jewelry; nine plot points come to a screeching halt; and, in the words of the Nostalgia Chick, we "have this weird sense of déja...Disney."

fifty shades, fifty shades darker, wtf!, bad sex scenes, bad writing

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