More pointless fic

Jan 18, 2008 09:03

With a little bit of cheesecake for Lisa.

In response to prompt 36 / ‘mad’ from
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cheesecake, logan, nekkid40, aurlco, max

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fauxcynic January 19 2008, 17:49:02 UTC
So very nice...! You start off right away by saying it all: "Unfortunately Logan wasn’t normal..." (tell me about it! ;})

"... the sight of his wrinkled nose and slight disorientation at their rocky mode of transportation almost made her forget that it all was his fault." (Would make us *all* melt... :D But getting past the image, this is so perfectly Max-- wanting to be mad at Logan, wanting to blame someone for the uncomfortable situation, but just unable to contend with how he makes her feel otherwise-- he's just too loveable!)

"Max had really tried to maintain her earlier irritation, keeping her mouth shut tightly as she observed Logan and his wary staring contest with the chicken in its cage only inches from his face... made her bet... he was mentally arranging one of his amazing dinners." (I love these two Logan images in this paragraph-- the 'nose to beak' image and Logan planning dinner...)

"Unbuckling her seatbelt, Max caught Logan’s sheepish look, his thumb guiltily tapping the wheel. 'That.. uh…won’t work. I lent the spare tire to Bling last week, so he could get to his patients…'" (another great image, such a nice detail with the thumb --can just see him!-- and the typical Logan giving up his spare so Bling can go out & help the downtrodden....!)

"Later on she would blame car sickness, the lack of oxygen and all the other things against which her revved up body was immune for..." Ah, that DA denial! Don't we love it!

What a great M & L moment! Thanks for sharing... ;}

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