Due South Fic: Imperative -- F/K -- PG

[geekwriter143]

Title: Imperative
Fandom: Due South
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: PG
Summary: Imperative, n. 1) an instinct that compels a certain behavior, 2) the verb mood used to give orders or make requests
A/N: The other day, I got an idea in my head. "Hey, I wonder if I can write an entire story in the imperative." Apparently I could.

Comments

[spoiledjap]

Ray honey you were in love with him from the moment you huged him in the bull pen. Well writen honey

[shihadchick]

...okay, so this gave me happy butterflies in my stomach, seriously. it was the wriggly sort of good build up and hooray with the happy ending, i really do like it a lot.

my inner grammar geek (who despite the incoherant comment here does in fact exist) is exceptionally pleased as well - it's a neat twist of an idea and you've executed it well enough that it doesn't feel like it's been forced into this format - it's very natural.

i particualarly liked the 'hum with delight' and the repetition of 'kiss him' and that last part of the last line is just fab. Thank you!

[sprat]

Wow, I really liked that. I don't think it would work in a longer fic, but this is perfect--punchy and somehow still very sweet. Nice!

[grey853]

Poor Ray, he's got it bad. But, if he's lucky, Fraser will understand and show him some really good footwork once he gets his boots off.

[shayheyred]

See -- this is what I love about fandom, the challenging oneself to try something new with a story. And I especially love it when the challenge works, and it's written with skill and creativity, like this is.