Another Piratey Drabble...

Jun 01, 2005 13:12

Wrote this for last week's drabble challenge at Black Pearl Sails--got it posted in the nick of time!

Theme:Insults )

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the_stowaway June 1 2005, 14:38:46 UTC
Hee! Cute!

Yet another irritation. Jack will ever be a thorn in Norrington's side, won't he?

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geekmama June 1 2005, 14:43:33 UTC
Jack will ever be a thorn in Norrington's side, won't he?

I think it would always be a love/hate relationship. I'm glad you liked it!

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geekmama June 1 2005, 15:02:28 UTC
Thanks! So happy you enjoyed.

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jenthegypsy June 1 2005, 15:02:50 UTC
So, the Commodore is taking a 'time out' aboard the Pearl I see.... Squeeee! Committed to Memories without a second thought. Love this audio-image (is there such a thing?) "...the pad and scrape of practiced booted feet." :-D

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geekmama June 1 2005, 15:18:49 UTC
Thanks -- so happy to have produced a "Squeeee!" And yes, I think audio-image is a great descriptor.

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hereswith June 1 2005, 15:13:28 UTC
Lovely work, as always :-) There's a nice rhythm to it and I especially like the: blue skies and shadowed sails wheeled overhead and the foe thudded to the sun-hammered deck.

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geekmama June 1 2005, 15:21:16 UTC
The first phrase is mine, but I have to admit that "sun-hammered deck" was a birthday gift from viva_gloria, a wordsmith of great excellence. I'm glad you enjoyed the drabble. :)

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the_dala June 1 2005, 15:17:09 UTC
*snicker*

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geekmama June 1 2005, 15:21:54 UTC
Hee!

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