So, the Commodore is taking a 'time out' aboard the Pearl I see.... Squeeee! Committed to Memories without a second thought. Love this audio-image (is there such a thing?) "...the pad and scrape of practiced booted feet." :-D
Lovely work, as always :-) There's a nice rhythm to it and I especially like the: blue skies and shadowed sails wheeled overhead and the foe thudded to the sun-hammered deck.
The first phrase is mine, but I have to admit that "sun-hammered deck" was a birthday gift from viva_gloria, a wordsmith of great excellence. I'm glad you enjoyed the drabble. :)
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Yet another irritation. Jack will ever be a thorn in Norrington's side, won't he?
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I think it would always be a love/hate relationship. I'm glad you liked it!
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