More Poetry

[geekmama]

Well, after all that complaining about having to write poetry, I managed to put my reply to the current drabble challenge in poetry form...

Comments

[aradiria]

mmm, wonderfully done. And I think the icon is absolutely fantastic, it helps...excentuate the poem. Or something. :)

[geekmama]

Yes, I don't get to use that icon too often. Glad you liked the poem!

[shyaway]

How beautiful!

[geekmama]

Thanks!

[tiggothy]

Mmm... gorgeous writing as always, luv. I especially liked the mention of pearls and the light imagery in
light to his shadow
day to his night
tempting, luring, entangling him
in a web of warm, honeyed sun

[geekmama]

Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed that.

[hereswith]

See, once you got over that threshold, the words kept coming :-) Lovely poem, and the descriptions are beautiful and very vivid.

Ps. Any chance of you telling who he is, is there? I've tried to guess, but am not completely decided...

[geekmama]

Actually, this started out as prose, but then I realised I could just change the formatting a little and post it as a poem, thus receiving extra points! Hahahahaha! Anyway, so happy you liked it.

And I deliberately kept the pairing ambiguous, so it could be Will, or Jack, or even Norrington. *G*

[hereswith]

I shall ignore all other possibilities and believe it's Jack, then, just because... ;-)

[geekmama]

Well, yes--you and me both. ;)

[leblacklabel]

Ah, the delights of Miss Swann's honey-hued hair.

It's all beautiful but I am with the second stanza all the way. I am sure that any of the three likely men would love to be entangled in Miss Swann's web of warm, honeyed sun.

[geekmama]

I am sure that any of the three likely men would love to be entangled in Miss Swann's web of warm, honeyed sun.

I expect so. We all have our favorite pairings, and who am I to rain on another's parade.

Thank you for the lovely comments!